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Ryoko T.D.C.
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[color=purple]hi! well, these are my attemps at taking pictures. i'm not that great, but i just love to take pictures of flowers and clouds..so here is my first picture:

[URL=http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v260/Suzuki_Chan/DSCF0572.jpg]sunflower[/URL]
[URL=http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v260/Suzuki_Chan/DSCF1814.jpg]flowers[/URL]

please comment and tall me what you think...

this is actually a weed in a puddle, all i did was zoom in on it and BAM! cute little flowers![/color]
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the sunflower is a pretty good shot... the colors looks fuller and distinct .. good focus.. ^^d

same goes for the flowers.. though the subjects are all over the picture... ^^;

good shots though quite typical subjects.. ^^; why not try taking pics of subject w/c can be very interesting.. ^^V ... something that can have this sort of charisma and uniqueness written all over it..
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I really like the flowers in the second picture, very pretty. I think the image could be a little more..crisper? I can't exactly say what's wrong...maybe try to up the contrast? Just seems like there's a dark film over it or something...but yeah, very nice images (thumbs up)
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[color=purple]thank you all for the comments. well, my moms camera is only a...i think it was a 3.2 pixel fuji...i don't really know...but here is one of my first pictures. i actually really like this one. i think it looks really gewd in black and white.

[URL=http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v260/Suzuki_Chan/DSCF0039.jpg]bird[/URL]

mom seems to really like this one[/color]

[URL=http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v260/Suzuki_Chan/DSCF0213.jpg]more flowers![/URL]
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I've never been really found of black and white pictures XD Although, I can definitly say the bird one is a good picture. The colours match very well and it gives off a certain eerie feeling. The pose is also very excellent in addition to the background. They all go well together to make a nice effect.

The flowers one would have to be one of my least favourtie...although, lilacs are my favourtie flower =D Have you tried tweaking your images in photoshop? I find that just a little bit of playing around with contrast and brightness can really make certain colours stand out in the photos. It seems like it could be brighter...but otherwise, a generally good image. =)
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The bird one is really interesting. but a very good image. I think for the flowers, the angle where you were taking it is somewhat awkward since you're almost directly over the flowers. Maybe try to take the pic at a different angle. and like Kune said, maybe try to bring out the colors in photoshop if you have it :)
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[size=1]xwoodlandelf, welcome to OtakuBoards. I'd recommend you read the [b][url=http://www.otakuboards.com/rules.php]Official OtakuBoards Rules[/url][/b], as well as the sticky on top of the Art Studio to get yourself aquainted with our expectations.

she_who_howls, I know for a fact I've given you a warning on critique before.

Both of you, as well as a surprising percentage of the Art Studio, needs to pull their post-quality together.

[size=2][b]No one is telling why they like the art, or what could be changed. As it is, you may as well not post -- saying "Oh, that's great" doesn't do anything for the artist as far as improvement. Please read what is expected of art critique on OtakuBoards, or face the consequences. I'm extremely tired of reposting the same "read the rules for critique" message, so here is the warning.[/b][/size]

Very sorry if that sounded agitated or angry -- I really don't want to shout. It's just that I feel rather frustrated that no one is reading my posts. Thanks for your time and patience.[/size]
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[COLOR=#656446][SIZE=1]Uhooo! Sunflowers! Wildflowers! Hydrangeas!

...And a bird?

I love the sunflower picture best: the yellow's really vibrant but it's easy on the eye, and the woodplank background gives it a warm, nature-y feel. The colors in them wildflowers and hydrangeas pictures are pleasing to the eye too. However, I've noticed that them flower pics are a bit off-center. What I mean is, had you moved a [i]bit[/i] to the right (wildflowers) or to the left (hydrangeas), the picture would've been perfect. But don't worry, it's such a minor problem that it took me a good while to see it!

(I'm a bit scared of the bird picture but it does look good in b&w.)

[b]9.5/10[/b]
[b]Ryoko[/b], you're making me wish that I had a horticulturist for a boyfriend. XD[/SIZE][/COLOR]
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