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[COLOR=Navy][FONT=Palatino Linotype]Ok well Im going to post up three drawings of mine. The first will be cloud from Kingdom hearts. The second is Sora and the third is Daisuke from DNAngel. Hope you like =D[/FONT][/COLOR]
[URL=http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d94/1nOnlyCloud/11111.jpg]Cloud[/URL]
[URL=http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d94/1nOnlyCloud/1111.jpg]Sora[/URL]
[URL=http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d94/1nOnlyCloud/Picture005.jpg]Daisuke[/URL]
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Well...firstly, not meaning to sounds offensive ^_^; But did you trace the first two? Or looking off something for that matter? It just seems to me like the first two seem to be a jump in skill compared to the Daisuke one. (not saying it's bad or anything, just the skill level is different) It looks to me like you were either tracing or looking off something...which is hard to crtique, because there's not much to say.

I guess...the first two look really good ^_^ There's a lot of attention to detail and it seems like you are pretty good with shading. I'd just recommend more practice (when looking off other pictures) because it takes a while to get used to different proportions.The Daisuke one seems kind of wide and a little squished. Try working with perspective more and how the body works. Remember you can't break the rules unless you know them first!
For example the eyes are an "eye width" apart from one another and have a certain distance between the side of the face. Same with between the nose and mouth. Try paying attention to those rules before going off on your own and breaking them =D
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[SIZE=1]I really like all three of them, Boredness. There's the occasional bitty part, but overall you've done a great job. Anyway, a little critique....

[B]Cloud:[/B] I suppose my main comment on this one would be to be more sparing with editing, particularly with the black background. In most parts it snuggles the line-work well, but in others it doesn't quite fit, and makes it seem as if the picture itself is rough around the edges rather than the background. One or two aspects of the drawing seem a little skewed, but the detail you've put into it is quite impressive. Kudos.

[B]Sora:[/B] Go you! This one would probably be my overall favourite of the lot. The shading all across this is superb, and the detail and proportions equally so. The mouth seems a little off, but that's only because of the variations in thickness between the middle and the edges. And... uh... though it's a little awkward to point this out, Sora seems to be lacking somewhat in the crotch department...

:animeswea

[B]Daisuke: [/B]I'll agree with Kune that this one appears a step behind the other two, but similarly not in a bad way. Overall, there's not all that much wrong with it, though the head seems squashed. I'm wondering... were you trying to get a 'looking down' effect here? If so, I've always had difficulty with those kind of pictures too, and I still haven't gotten the hang of it. Still, another thumbs-up overall.

[I]Here's looking forward to seeing more stuff...[/I][/SIZE]
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  • 2 weeks later...
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no i did not trace. the daisuke one was from the book i just drew it bigger and i just made it a simple drawing. well here is another one that i drew yesterday. I did it with a black pen its my own character. I dont have a scanner so i just took a picture of it. (I scanned the other drawings in school.)
[URL=http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d94/1nOnlyCloud/pic5.jpg]My drawing[/URL]
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They're all not half bad. I think you did your best with Sora though. It's pretty well proportioned and the shading really adds depth to the picture. Your Cloud drawing looks....(no offense meant) a little squished? The length and width of his arms seem a bit off compared to his body. I felt like his arms needed a bit more meat to them in order to carry the heavy sword that he does!
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hm...Try to work on the proportions of the body. They seem just a bit off but besides that they are pretty good. and also try to study the wrinkles of clothing. Some of the wrinkles don't really belong there [referring to the most recent one] :)
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[FONT=Trebuchet MS][QUOTE=de_valentine]how old are you
cuz u have some potencial[/QUOTE]
According to their profile their birthdate is April 29, 1993. So, unless you can't do the math, your post is rather meaningless. Please read the [URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=53330][U]Constructive Criticism[/U][/URL] rules sticky at the top of the forum page before you continue posting, and it'll explain why posts such as yours are looked down upon.

Oh, and "potential".[/FONT]
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Um yea thanks. well here are two more i did a long time ago

[URL=http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d94/1nOnlyCloud/STA_1490_edited.jpg]Kingdom Hearts cover[/URL]

Ok for that one i messed up on kairi's face a lil. I dont have that drawing anymore since someone stole it o well the next one is one of my originals

[URL=http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d94/1nOnlyCloud/dark.jpg]Angel[/URL]
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