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Writing Immortal In Death (Poem)


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[B][CENTER][COLOR=RoyalBlue]Immortal In Death[/COLOR][/CENTER][/B]

[CENTER]Nothingness, world of darkness, where am I...
I turned around and thought this might be lie...

Nobody can hear my shouts and screams...
In this world I lost all of my hope and dreams...

Serpants and dragons bite me day and night...
Yet I survive and I know something is not right...

I have no strength to move a finger anymore...
I am supposed to be dead and no more...

Tons of huge rocks being thrown on my head...
I wish it's the end and I hope I am dead ...

I can see angels and they are killing me again...
I am dead, I die again and again yet alive I remain...

I believed for immortality there will never be a portal...
Surprisingly enough, in the end I've became immortal...

I finally figured out where I am, 6 feet under the ground...
Where only darkness and soldiers of god roam around...

Yeah I died before and I am already dead, it's life after death...
God made me a special immortal, the immortal in death...[/CENTER]

[CENTER][B][COLOR=RoyalBlue]DarkLordDragon[/COLOR][/B][/CENTER]
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[size=1][color=#CD6619]On behalf of the [B]OB Anthology[/B], welcome. I'm pleased to see your appearance here, [B]DarkLordDragon[/B]. Let's get right to the point.

First off, have you had a chance reading the [B]OB Anthology Basics[/B] sticky? If not, please read it for it helps with understanding the requirements needed for a creative thread such as: [B]Rating System[/B], content, criticism, etc. But the most important is a Rating and since your thread does not have one, I'm sorry to say, it'll have to be closed.

But if you do wish to recreate your thread, you can. All you have to remember is the rating and then you're good to go.

THREAD CLOSED.[/size][/color]
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