Writing Return of the Haiku!

[Retribution]

[size=1]Some of you older members might remember that I had written a bunch of haiku in the Anthology. If you care to read those, just search. This thread will be devoted to my more recent poems.

I'm looking to seriously develop my abilities, so please don't take it easy on me. I guess I'll start out with one for now.

[center][b]Slipping[/b]

everyday, my life
massacres the art within
silent genocide[/center][/size]

[neko Misty]

wow... I like it. :animesmil can really identify with that... life can b a drag, filled with all these extraneous things that have nothing 2 do w/where I want 2 b or what I want 2 do w/ my life.
I haven't written haiku since I was in high school... long time ago.

[Elk]

that is really good. thought prvoking, just like haikus were ment to be. =] You're a very good poet!