Writing Blind [E]

[Lionheart]

[FONT="Franklin Gothic Medium"]This is a song my friend and I made. It's a short song, trying to make it longer.

[B]Verse 1[/B]
Looking down a path I once called my life
sitting alone I couldn?t understand why
I made this choice that set me astray
staring at myself and how I got this way
now it seems that everything is said and done
I was young got fooled, used like a tool
they came to me on my darkest hour
what was wrong before feels so right

[B]Chorus[/B]
Why I can?t see? What happen to me?
The darkness, engulfs my dreams.
My regrets scream, of what I could be.
Tomorrow, my ending is unseen.

Why I can?t see? What happen to me?
The darkness, engulfs my dreams.
My regrets scream, of what I could be.
Tomorrow, my ending is unclean.[/FONT]

[Metalcore501]

[quote name='Lionheart'][FONT="Franklin Gothic Medium"]This is a song my friend and I made. It's a short song, trying to make it longer.

[B]Verse 1[/B]
Looking down a path I once called my life
sitting alone I couldn?t understand why
I made this choice that set me astray
staring at myself and how I got this way
now it seems that everything is said and done
I was young got fooled, used like a tool
they came to me on my darkest hour
what was wrong before feels so right

[B]Chorus[/B]
Why I can?t see? What happen to me?
The darkness, engulfs my dreams.
My regrets scream, of what I could be.
Tomorrow, my ending is unseen.

Why I can?t see? What happen to me?
The darkness, engulfs my dreams.
My regrets scream, of what I could be.
Tomorrow, my ending is unclean.[/FONT][/QUOTE]

[COLOR="DarkRed"]It sounds great! But I'm sorry I don't have any advice on how to increase the songs size, but when I am stuck looking for another verse I look back at the first and see what direction the song is going and try to make a story out of it.[/COLOR]