Art Saikano Fan Art - Need some comments :P

[MrMarshall]

Hey, I was hoping I could get some feedback on this fan art I based on the anime, Saikano :D (Be nice) :P

[URL="http://www.theotaku.com/fanart/view/319844/saikano_-_chise_and_shuji"]Clicky Here [/URL]

Thank you. :D x

[visualkei]

Shading is pretty good. I would suggest to change the size of the girl's head. Her head being that size makes her look like a kid about to make out with a grown man. =)

[MrMarshall]

[quote name='visualkei']Shading is pretty good. I would suggest to change the size of the girl's head. Her head being that size makes her look like a kid about to make out with a grown man. =)[/quote]

Hehe :P To be honest, in the anime itself it actually does look like she's dating a grown man yet they're the same age :S

[m00g]

I suggest you work on facial structure more especially with profiles. Nothing that some practice can't fix! Nice blending with the pencil though.