JCBaggee Posted May 10, 2002 Share Posted May 10, 2002 [color=red][size=3]This one isn't as happy and cheery as the last one, but enjoy either way! Pain... A thousand screaming children... The taste of blood in my mouth... The smell of rotting flesh... The cry of a wild animal... The coldness of a never-ending abyss... The death of innocence. .......not one of my personal favorites, but I'll let you guys decide on this one! --JCBaggee[/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spikey Posted May 10, 2002 Share Posted May 10, 2002 [COLOR=coral]That was good. But you need to post your poetry in Todays Poetry. That is where you post your poetry. That was really good. Keep it going.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tima Posted May 10, 2002 Share Posted May 10, 2002 that was................................................unique, but it was still good keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest cloricus Posted May 11, 2002 Share Posted May 11, 2002 I don't get it. Is it ment to say some thing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JCBaggee Posted May 12, 2002 Author Share Posted May 12, 2002 [color=red][size=3]It means whatever you want it to mean. For me, it's about what it must feel like to die needlessly...before your time...but interpret it yourself.[/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cora Jane 2 Posted May 12, 2002 Share Posted May 12, 2002 I like it, i think that it is a good way of expression... i have some poetry also, not on this site though... i haven't had time to get any out... if you want to see any of mine, i have some on [url]http://poetry.com[/url] and you would have to search under Korina Gruber there is lies... Peace Out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest cloricus Posted May 13, 2002 Share Posted May 13, 2002 Sorry I read it the other day (when I was depressed) and it sounded like complete crap. But now I read it and it sounds good :)! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JCBaggee Posted May 13, 2002 Author Share Posted May 13, 2002 [color=red][size=3]Okay...thanks...I guess...[/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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