Writing Yet another poem...title is The Chance

[Mitch]

Ok, lately I haven't been writing as much as I usually do, but here is a poem. It's ok, sometimes I just don't feel like writing for long periods of time, then I just write crazily once I get in the mood. Well, here's the poem.

The Chance
[color=red]Come with me my young traveler
to the place few can see
the place where the corruption is covered up and the real world is revealed
the real world hidden from those blinded by their own self-indulgences
blinded to those who are corrupt themselves
to those who only want the world as the way it is
those people, they will be our downfall
the world will only waste away
like sand slipping through a hand
until only a few specs are left
and all is gone forever
but if you can open your eyes
see the world without such an awkward stance
you can see through that corruption
accept the dying chance
and become more that which can see
but that which can do
and stand up for the future
and embrace your rights[/color]

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