Corey Posted May 25, 2002 Share Posted May 25, 2002 If no one here minds I would like to bounce a few poems off of you. Most of my poems are anger or death related because they are two things know well. And, my second. Holes- By; Corey Roos I bury you down, Deep inside, I bury you down, So you can't decide. Way down there, You cannot touch, The things I do, At least not much. You are like, A neverending disease, A gateway drug, Or a hive of bee's. You come in waves, Like a cold, First I'm burning, Then my stomach unfolds. Your the drug, That opens doors, Doors into hurt, Doors into scorn. You come in a swarm, Like a mass of bee's, You sting and cause pain, When you are free. Many call you, Your true name, hate, I call you my other, Personality trait. Why do I have you, I do not know, Why are you here, I think you should go. You are not welcome, In the sanctum of my mind, Stay subdued, Untill your time... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest cloricus Posted May 25, 2002 Share Posted May 25, 2002 good. are they all one poem or separate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sui Generis Posted May 25, 2002 Share Posted May 25, 2002 Very good poem! I like it alot! Nice rhthym! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corey Posted May 26, 2002 Author Share Posted May 26, 2002 It's all one. Could you guys check out my other one too? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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