Writing La Lune

[PrisonerOfHope]

The night rolls in
Such as the moon flies overhead
Casting its hue upon us
The grassy knoll high above the fields
We lay there;
The stars are dots to form
Words that need not be uttered
Phrases so cliche
And the abyss swallowing the hilltop
The gaping maw
And us hand-in-hand;
The speeding of time past our ears
Sounds like the wind in our hair
Inside the chasm that is around us...
And the trees are still,
As the air passes them by
But it chills us to the bone
But we move closer
Until the mood exits the scene slowly
And completes her bows
For the eternel performance...
And we are there
Watching her dance on the stars-
Hide in the clouds-
Every scene is within our reach
For we know the dance of la lune.

[Corey]

My God....
That is incredible....
Wow...
Wow....

[Raiha]

[COLOR=seagreen]Lovely, it sounds like a song written by Sarah Brightman.....And believe me, that is a good thing.[/COLOR]

[Sere Tuscumbia]

One word for you: Wow . . .

Keep writing!

~!*Sere*!~

[PrisonerOfHope]

A friend of mine wrote that. I'll tell him what you guys said. I'm sure he will be pleased.

-POH

[Guest JinjistMataku]

Who write that poem?

I do not remember seen it.

[i]Jemn[/i] :freak: Yes, it's the 3 eyed smiley again :smirk:

[Mist]

Wow...I'm in a daze! I loved it! So mysterious and transient...Great job!