Writing The End

[Bahamaut2020]

This is a poem a created. Post what you think of it.

THE END

The end is near
The world will end
There is no way to escape it

People run in panic
Police get trampled
The skys now begin to darken

The people stop running
The lights go out
The world ends in a cloud.
THE END IS HERE

That is my poem. Tell me what you think of it. END TRANSMISSION

[The Harlequin]

[font=gothic]Too simply phrased. Too cloyingly dramatic...[/font]