Bahamaut2020 Posted June 2, 2002 Share Posted June 2, 2002 This is a poem a created. Post what you think of it. THE END The end is near The world will end There is no way to escape it People run in panic Police get trampled The skys now begin to darken The people stop running The lights go out The world ends in a cloud. THE END IS HERE That is my poem. Tell me what you think of it. END TRANSMISSION Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Harlequin Posted June 3, 2002 Share Posted June 3, 2002 [font=gothic]Too simply phrased. Too cloyingly dramatic...[/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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