Writing Terror

[Shinobi]

I Was Wacthing Spider-Man And A Certain Scene Made Me Remeber:

I come in from school
Such a delightful day
I see the TV and it all fades away
The twin towers, falling and crumbling
People screaming, the rubble tumbling
You can see the terror in thier eye
Why, oh why must they people die
So, Osama, F*ck Yo Momma
You twsited mother F*cker
That blood, splatted on the floor, that is of an inocent worker
But now I'm Glad, and at piece of mind
Because all of you are not living
Now your up there living it large, With God up in Heaven
Your away from Evil and Phyco freaks
Who kill just for pleasure
But when Osama dies
Some other freak, his body, will treasure

[The Harlequin]

[font=gothic][color=crimson]Spelling. Try it some time. You may be surprised at how it turns out. And I don't know that the "mother" reference really needed to be put in there, it detracts from the quality of the poem.[/font][/color]

[Guest Saiyangohan2002]

[color=green] That made me remeber 9/11, to sit back and reflect on a horrible tragedy... until the Mother f**** came out! it ruined it man. Choice of words would have been advised. Plus osama woin't be livin it up with God, He'll be roasting witht he devil tonight :devil: [/color]

[Shinobi]

i didnt say he woudld b up with god i said teh people killed will b up with god

[Empathy]

hmm...it did make me reflect on 9/11...and I'm not going to criticize you on the whoole mother ****** thing...its your poem...and its what you feel I guess...it did make me think though...