Writing Weapons.

[Flipmodesquad]

You cannot take the sounds of war towards the innocent
They will take them to you
They shall bring a cry
A cry
So loud
It shall awaken the dead
It shall make them become dead
It shall resurrect them as the dead.
Bring forth a cry for war
Those of innocence
Bring an army to grant you peace
To destroy those who have
Not heard your cries for mercy.
Bring a time of despair
unworthyness,
despute,
and weakness.

[Boo]

Good one. you could do something with rime, but still a great poem

[Flipmodesquad]

I think of my self as a dpressed child when im reading it lol. Well I was talking about something with sept11 how when The innocence(people of world trade center) died and how they are getting revenge by getting the living to kill those who have attacked them.