Phantom Posted October 10, 2002 Posted October 10, 2002 [color=sienna][b]One lie cannot expell the truth[/b] One lie, untold the truth behold, our lives can tell your here, Two lies, too old, unwise, and cold, our eyes do sense your near, Three lies, one sold, truth hides, unbold, our gloomy faith reveared, Through the haze of gospel times, through those holy gospel lies, the rhymes that near and deprive, through expelled truth... Four lies, alone, filled with a groan, can enthrall, replace and bestow anger-riddled faith, to expell the truth, until there is no more... in an awkward embrace with unjust faith... alone and cold... m.s Hunter[/color]
Vegitto4 Posted October 10, 2002 Posted October 10, 2002 Well done. ** clap clap clap** very wll done. I like that one alot. What was the inspiration?
vegeta rocker Posted October 10, 2002 Posted October 10, 2002 i like very much. It isnt weighed down with ridiculous rhyme. It is like pure thought, with some rhyme thrown in.
Phantom Posted October 10, 2002 Author Posted October 10, 2002 Veg...exactly... the inspiration is a personal thing.. yes but its not going to be open for discussion here.. hehe.. just the produce of my utter inhumane starvation for hate... :)
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