Ok i had another poetry section but they took it off :( so now im starting a new one and im inviting everyone 2 test themselves 2 writing some cool poems and having them critizied
Here's my first:
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Silver clouds
Blood red sky
shrieks fill the dusk
A spinning barrel
"Click"
One messenger of death, life to some, left
Closed eyes, one final prayer crosses the lips of the damned
One final breath drawn
"sigh"
Life no more
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Sometimes i look at the night sky
The starry sky, bright and pure
I think to myself
I wish i had someone special to share it with
Then i remember you
How we used to gaze at the sky, and each other for hours
I feel a tug in my heart, a warm feeling
It feels good on a cold, lonely nite like to nite
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Life is an illusion for the coming death which is the destiny promised to all life.
Fearlessly we stand to face the impending wrath of ultimate destruction.
Fear and Hatred rule the day, and pride clouds our minds the long road of freedom is ahead of us and our journey has only begun
The Mind of a disconnected soul
He looks up with dead eyes at the droplets of water streaming down the glass pane. Slowly he feels his grip on sanity and reality slipping away. He cries out but on one hears his screams. The cold creeps all over his body and his head slips below the water surface, watching the world from another place..............another perspective, placed here by forces unseen but never belonging