[QUOTE=Balmon]Frankly, if you've given The Arena a glance or two, you'd have noticed that there are about a hundred .hack RPGs in progress.
Also, if you've been following any of the other discussions in the underground, you'll have read comments from people on OB regarding relatively unsuccessful RPGs. Things such as your paragraph-long story, which is not only tiresome on the eyes but for the mind as well, fail to create a world in a which your participants would inhabit. While I believe (I don't know anything about this .hack business, but I assume it is all based on an anime show or manga) many people assume there is plenty of backstory to this .hack thing, just throwing down a paragraph and hoping for the best is perhaps not the best way to go about it.
I would check out some of the other discussion in The Arena Undeground, especially ones where the moderators have given their input on the matter, and give your RPG some thought.
Cheers,
Phil[/QUOTE]
Well.... heh, that kind of caught me offguard. Thanks for the advice though. I'm sort of new to this and i havn't done any adventuring things online at all. I've done a few successful fights but that's about it. Well thanks anyway. But one thing. I'd suggest not letting yourself sound so mean. I don't know if that's how you meant it, but with the whole "frankly" thing happening it kind of came that way. (just a hint so don't get mad about it or anything please)