The main character (Kyoko) is a tomboy with a short temper, so she always ends up whacking the king for being an idiot. None of my friends cared that the king was unrealistic, so thanks, I'll work on that.
The storyline's...eggghhh, I can't explain it very much, it's just pretty much Kyoko trying survive the king's crazy kingdom. And like the king's country gets into wars with like 3 other countries, and gets involved with heaven, etc. So there's Kyoko's crazy over-protective brother that comes in, trying to drag Kyoko back home, there's the angel, Cremia, who's like Flonne from the game Disgaea (flaky and pure and happy-go-lucky), Kyoko's mother who's flaky too and kind and kinda...ehh....crazy, but just a tad. There's also Kyoko's dad who gets in a war against the king's country and wants to rule the entire Netherworld, so he first sends out his kids to pull that off. Who else is there....? Oh yeah, there's the savage monster-king who is only intrested in inflicting plain.
Sorry if it's kinda funky, I can't explain very well, plus the storyline's not really clear...If I finish some pages, I'll post up some of my pages later.