SSJ5 Vegeta Posted September 9, 2001 Share Posted September 9, 2001 Tell me what you all think of these poems: FORSAKEN I stare out of the glazed window As everything slowly falls around me It seems I can?t do anything right anymore I?m a **** up a screw up I?m always failing As I slip in and out of reality I just don?t give a **** anymore I?m pulling myself away From everyone and everything I won?t be hurt anymore Stare into my eyes And you?ll see your lies Welled up inside And the anger I try to hide Do I choose to pull myself away The more it hurts I want it even more Do I live, or die another day? I don?t care about anything anymore I don?t care about anyone else but me You can all just go screw yourselves Because I?m in love with myself I don?t trust anyone anymore Cuz? everyone?s cheated me out like a whore And in the past I?ve been tortured God only knows the pain I?ve suffered But not even he will do anything about it Now that you know how I feel What?s it like to feel like **** Cmon take me before I am taken I feel so pathetic Take me, I feel so forsaken SUFFERING You lied to me I have no future You destroyed it I felt a change deep inside I love you but understand I?ll never be the same again I wanna? bleed out right in front of you And tear my heart out and give it to you I don?t need it anymore But you might, so I won?t suffer And I try to keep my hate bottled inside For all of those who have ever hurt me All the tears I?ve cried Won?t replace my hate inside All the tears I cry Cannot replace your lies And I stuff everything down inside Just like my father I don?t feel like living so why bother And I feel the hate rise up and I shudder In this life, is my only purpose to suffer? PATHETIC The nightmares live trapped inside my head I still remember clearly, everything you said You said that I?m just a ****ing addict You could never learn to love And that I made you sick Then you left me Left me to die in the wake of all this **** This has become the way I live Drugs replace attention, you didn?t give I know I need help but not from you Why ask for something you won?t do You tell me that I amount to nothing Well you made me so do something You call me a piece of **** druggy You made me this way so help me **** you! Call me a druggy It?s people like you, that made me this way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Posted September 9, 2001 Share Posted September 9, 2001 i didn't read it, but kinda take a little glimpse at it. from what i've seen, that poem's writer sounds like he/she has low self-esteem and angry at world..and wants its revenge.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt.D Posted September 9, 2001 Share Posted September 9, 2001 [color=rainbow] Those poems r full of emotion. I like them!;)[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
James Posted September 9, 2001 Share Posted September 9, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Jeff [/i] [B]i didn't read it, but kinda take a little glimpse at it. from what i've seen, that poem's writer sounds like he/she has low self-esteem and angry at world..and wants its revenge.. [/B][/QUOTE] [color=darkblue]Yeah...those poems are good poems...but they are slightly disturbing lol, especially if the author actually feels that way. But sometimes poetry can be a good way to express feelings without actually acting upon them. In any case, they were pretty well written. :)[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSJ5 Vegeta Posted September 9, 2001 Author Share Posted September 9, 2001 CEASE Guts spilled & flesh removed Blood spilling out, turning cold My flesh is worn smooth Collecting mold The fear is in your eye A broken nerve Exposed your lie All of you, you?re the disease Me, I?m the f***ing cure And after the aftermath I?ll make sure nothings left All your pleas for sovereignty Will cease_before me! C: You will cease to exist You will cease to breathe I?ll steal your breath I?m gonna? f***ing waste everybody Put an end to this disease And everything will cease Rip you out with a f***ing pair of forceps Pound out your f***ing skulls Claw at you with my bare fists And dig you out like bloody cysts And eat you, you won?t escape I?ll find you, I?ll eat you away Tear you apart piece by piece Till all of you f***ing cease C: You piece of ****, suck my dick It?s my a** you kiss, my balls you lick Rejected piece of sh** Not worth the time to f***ing kill But worth the time to watch your blood spill And taste it deep inside, and feel it rise The anger, the pain, the shame, the torment Don?t say you?re not ready for this f***ing chaos Trying to speak out with a cut out tongue Trying to breathe, with a blown out lung Motherf***er look at me, look into me As you f***ing cease Pass into death You will no longer exist Pass into death You no longer exist Pass into death You no longer exist I?ll destroy the disease AND ALL OF YOU WILL F***ING CEASE!!!! SLEDGE I don?t give a **** what?s going on in the world today So you can get the **** out of my face Telling me that I?m not good enough For your ***, I?m more than enough I?m more than you can handle Coming through with a ten ton sledge! Breaking through you with a ten ton sledge! Coming through gonna? break some ****ing ribs! Crack some f***in? skulls on a broken deathbed! Ahhhhh! F***in? sledge! Broken cysts and running puss You can kill me but you can kill all of us Broken promises what happened to the trust? Like a cancer you f***ing spread Like a heart attack I?ll knock your a** dead Coming through with a ten ton sledge! I?m breaking through you with a ten ton sledge! Coming through gonna? break some f***ing ribs! Crack some f***in? skulls on a broken deathbed! Ahhhh! F***in? sledge! PACIFICATION Madness literal sadness F*** me f*** you F*** everyone in this place Get the f*** outta? my face Stepping up and talking **** F***off or you?re going home in a casket What?s done is done What?s said is said Your end has come Taste the lead Stop trying to kill me You can?t kill what?s already dead F***ing insanity, f*** me Get the f*** away from me You?re no friend, another enemy Gimme what you can, I can handle anything Give me the pain, bring the pain You f***er bring the pain, bring it to me! Made scapegoat by society Guilty by association You f***'s look at me You think I?m the f***ed up one Take a look in the mirror Good thing you don?t You wouldn?t like what I see I didn?t ask for this sh** You forced it upon me I didn?t want it But you just kept force-feeding You placed it upon my head Now all of you will know your mistake When you?re cold and dead Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Digivise Posted September 9, 2001 Share Posted September 9, 2001 In the first poems it sounded like you were a love sick puppy. In this other set it sounded like the one that had loved you had now cheated on you. And you were quite angry with them. And what's with all the ****'s. Can't you write a poem without them. :rolleyes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice Dragon v2 Posted September 9, 2001 Share Posted September 9, 2001 i know i think theres one too may f***s Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 9, 2001 Share Posted September 9, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Jeff [/i] [B]i didn't read it, but kinda take a little glimpse at it. from what i've seen, that poem's writer sounds like he/she has low self-esteem and angry at world..and wants its revenge.. [/B][/QUOTE] I agree. Most definatley Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turkey Posted September 9, 2001 Share Posted September 9, 2001 Nice poems! Can I post one too? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSJ5 Vegeta Posted September 9, 2001 Author Share Posted September 9, 2001 Sure go ahead. You can post your poems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turkey Posted September 9, 2001 Share Posted September 9, 2001 This morning I woke up and on my bed I found a note. I read it once or twice, the message seemed really nice. It said I have a duty and that is to kick some booty. -Smoky Joe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Master O Beans Posted September 9, 2001 Share Posted September 9, 2001 Ah yes, I can definitely tell you listen to quite a bit of SlipKnot! they have definitely influenced your writting, and I must say, I'm rather impressed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Master O Beans Posted September 9, 2001 Share Posted September 9, 2001 Oops. Please delete this post. (To Mods) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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