vegeta rocker Posted February 28, 2003 Share Posted February 28, 2003 After turning this in in english class i was told i need therapy. This is a sonnet version of Sango's Song of Sorrow which i posted here long ago. Each line has 10 syllables and follows a rhyme scheme. Try and guess it for the fun of it. This version is called... Into Oblivion i never thought that it could end this way my heart feels like it has been turned to stone about such a sadness what can one say wish that your life would replace my very own such a sight no one should ever have to see yet how is it you were younger than i hatred replaces my tears it must be inoccence pours from the corners of my eyes but what i will become will be much more revenge is truly a thirst not a friend from eternal hate my soul has gone sore i only wish retribution would end imminent damnations not to be feared within my malice i still hold you near Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cora Jane 2 Posted February 28, 2003 Share Posted February 28, 2003 [font=arial][size=1][color=blue]well the pattern is close to Shakespearean... but hey that is what I have been writing for like the last week... and reading for the last two weeks... it's good, I like it, and it is similar to how I write... like your choice of words and the themes. [/font][/size][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChibiV Posted February 28, 2003 Share Posted February 28, 2003 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by vegeta rocker [/i] [B]After turning this in in english class i was told i need therapy. [/B][/QUOTE] It's dark and fill with madness. But I don't think it's that serious yet. Strange though, why would they told you that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cora Jane 2 Posted February 28, 2003 Share Posted February 28, 2003 [font=arial][size=1][color=blue]I've been told that I need help many times, also been told a lot of other things because of the poetry that I write. Most of the time my poetry is dark, depressing, and occasionally violent. Once in a while, it is all lovey-dovey. hehe... I do fall in love, but then again, love sucks. But yeah, I don't think you need therapy, not yet, it's not dark enough for that... ^_^ But hey, I really don't have too much room to talk about needing help for all the dark stuff I write. [/font][/size][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vegeta rocker Posted February 28, 2003 Author Share Posted February 28, 2003 yeah, most of my stuff is dark. It is easier to express then love. BUt that doesn't mean i don't feel it. To answer your question ChibiV i think it is because everyone elses was about love or football. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChibiV Posted March 1, 2003 Share Posted March 1, 2003 I see, they just don't like to accept something different. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vegeta rocker Posted March 3, 2003 Author Share Posted March 3, 2003 Maybe i should write a love story about a depressed football................... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LostProphet Posted March 3, 2003 Share Posted March 3, 2003 I like it...it sounds kind of like something Papa Roach would sing, only in a medieval type of song Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChibiV Posted March 4, 2003 Share Posted March 4, 2003 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by vegeta rocker [/i] [B]Maybe i should write a love story about a depressed football................... [/B][/QUOTE] Don't do that. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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