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After turning this in in english class i was told i need therapy.
This is a sonnet version of Sango's Song of Sorrow which i posted here long ago. Each line has 10 syllables and follows a rhyme scheme. Try and guess it for the fun of it.
This version is called...

Into Oblivion
i never thought that it could end this way
my heart feels like it has been turned to stone
about such a sadness what can one say
wish that your life would replace my very own

such a sight no one should ever have to see
yet how is it you were younger than i
hatred replaces my tears it must be
inoccence pours from the corners of my eyes

but what i will become will be much more
revenge is truly a thirst not a friend
from eternal hate my soul has gone sore
i only wish retribution would end

imminent damnations not to be feared
within my malice i still hold you near
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[font=arial][size=1][color=blue]well the pattern is close to Shakespearean... but hey that is what I have been writing for like the last week... and reading for the last two weeks... it's good, I like it, and it is similar to how I write... like your choice of words and the themes. [/font][/size][/color]
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[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by vegeta rocker [/i]
[B]After turning this in in english class i was told i need therapy.

It's dark and fill with madness. But I don't think it's that serious yet. Strange though, why would they told you that.
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[font=arial][size=1][color=blue]I've been told that I need help many times, also been told a lot of other things because of the poetry that I write. Most of the time my poetry is dark, depressing, and occasionally violent. Once in a while, it is all lovey-dovey. hehe... I do fall in love, but then again, love sucks. But yeah, I don't think you need therapy, not yet, it's not dark enough for that... ^_^ But hey, I really don't have too much room to talk about needing help for all the dark stuff I write. [/font][/size][/color]
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