ChibiV Posted May 8, 2003 Share Posted May 8, 2003 Please give me some commeent and correction. I'm working on it, it doesn't sound right. Thank you. Oh goodnesses, must you be so strong Weakening the heart, softening the mind Killing the hates, brightening the blind Such power, I am craving for so long Do such goodness power really exist Within my dark heart and my blindly eyes The one who never believe in your kind Your existance is nothing but a mist Oh goodnesses, do you exist in me So I can taste the true power of yours Such power that I have been searching for Within my black heart that I cannot see Even goodnesses can open my eyes Perhaps the future, now, I am blind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eve Posted May 12, 2003 Share Posted May 12, 2003 w0w!!! i like it. -no correction -keep it original!^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChibiV Posted May 12, 2003 Author Share Posted May 12, 2003 This is a newer version which I just edited [color=crimson]Power of love, must you be so strong Weakening the heart, softening the mind Killing the hates, brightening the blinds Such powers, I am craving for so long Do such strange powers really exist With in the deep,dark, and cold heart of mine The one who never believed in your kind Your existance is nothing but a mist Power of love, do you exist in me So I can taste the true power of yours Such powers that I have been searching for To lighten up my eyes that cannot see Even such powers can open my eyes Perhaps the future, now, I am blind[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eve Posted May 12, 2003 Share Posted May 12, 2003 w0w!!! I like it just as much as the 1st one! man i can't even wright one line, but that dose not keep me from try'n and it shouldn't stop anybody from try'n!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinkoru Posted May 12, 2003 Share Posted May 12, 2003 Its nice and Eve, EVERYONE can write poetry, just think of something that means a lot to you and let the feelings flow.. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eve Posted May 13, 2003 Share Posted May 13, 2003 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Phantom's Angel [/i] [B]Its nice and Eve, EVERYONE can write poetry, just think of something that means a lot to you and let the feelings flow.. :) [/B][/QUOTE] i know that it just some-people have a hard time reach'n that fill'n *i did* just send'n words of encouragement ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinkoru Posted May 13, 2003 Share Posted May 13, 2003 *nods* thats wat I was attemptin to acomplish :) Hehehe. Btw Eve, I found an avitar that seem to suit you. :) I'll attach it. (i maded it:)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eve Posted May 13, 2003 Share Posted May 13, 2003 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Shinkoru [/i] [B]*nods* thats wat I was attemptin to acomplish :) Hehehe. Btw Eve, I found an avitar that seem to suit you. :) I'll attach it. (i maded it:)) [/B][/QUOTE] thanks i'll use it;) but what do you mean it suits me?:therock: just wonder'n Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinkoru Posted May 13, 2003 Share Posted May 13, 2003 First off u should PM Charles and ask him to change your name to Eve, the non cap looks odd, second;y I created a RPG char named Eve, that was one of the first pics I used 4 her. :) Here on otaku I imagine pplz looking like their avitars if its an naime char. :) Thats how i percive you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eve Posted May 14, 2003 Share Posted May 14, 2003 thanks a-lot i'll do that;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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