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Please give me some commeent and correction. I'm working on it, it doesn't sound right. Thank you.


Oh goodnesses, must you be so strong
Weakening the heart, softening the mind
Killing the hates, brightening the blind
Such power, I am craving for so long

Do such goodness power really exist
Within my dark heart and my blindly eyes
The one who never believe in your kind
Your existance is nothing but a mist

Oh goodnesses, do you exist in me
So I can taste the true power of yours
Such power that I have been searching for
Within my black heart that I cannot see

Even goodnesses can open my eyes
Perhaps the future, now, I am blind
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This is a newer version which I just edited

[color=crimson]Power of love, must you be so strong
Weakening the heart, softening the mind
Killing the hates, brightening the blinds
Such powers, I am craving for so long

Do such strange powers really exist
With in the deep,dark, and cold heart of mine
The one who never believed in your kind
Your existance is nothing but a mist

Power of love, do you exist in me
So I can taste the true power of yours
Such powers that I have been searching for
To lighten up my eyes that cannot see

Even such powers can open my eyes
Perhaps the future, now, I am blind[/color]
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[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Phantom's Angel [/i]
[B]Its nice and Eve, EVERYONE can write poetry, just think of something that means a lot to you and let the feelings flow.. :) [/B][/QUOTE]

i know that it just some-people have a hard
time reach'n that fill'n *i did*
just send'n words of encouragement ;)
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[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Shinkoru [/i]
[B]*nods* thats wat I was attemptin to acomplish :) Hehehe. Btw Eve, I found an avitar that seem to suit you. :) I'll attach it. (i maded it:)) [/B][/QUOTE]
thanks i'll use it;)
but what do you mean it suits me?:therock:
just wonder'n
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First off u should PM Charles and ask him to change your name to Eve, the non cap looks odd, second;y I created a RPG char named Eve, that was one of the first pics I used 4 her. :) Here on otaku I imagine pplz looking like their avitars if its an naime char. :) Thats how i percive you.
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