Writing Haiku POEM Thread.

[tattoi nobori]

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A sudden stillness
Herald of the gath'ring storm
War comes to Omi

A lone raven cries:
Treachery! The ancient pact
Is now abandoned

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From distant mountains
His troop arrayed for battle
Tokugawa comes

Nobunaga's sword
Bright steel flashing in the sun
Razor of heaven

Across the river
Once an ally, no longer:
Nagamasa waits

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Dawn breaks on Oda
Bright banners wave in the breeze
The soldiers muster

Three armies march out
At the banks of the Ane
The waters run red
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A haiku retelling of the battle of Anegawa. ?_? Could someone rate this, please?

[Carr]

bright yellow feathers
broken dreams again fly by
sleepless nights wasted.

hope is bright feathers
floating on bright futures
not alive today

nights wasted worrying
will tommorrow be better
not living in now

[Guest Rhyio Ohkie]

You think you know how
I feel, but you have no way
of knowing these things.

Just because you were
so close to my heart for that
small fraction of time

doesn't mean that you
can or even had a chance
at breaking my heart.

You have no way of
knowing what pain I have felt
in my heart, mind, soul....

[Phantom]

eh eh! nice avatar..good haiku too :)

[color=red][size=1][i][center]never the less, I
am trapped in a realm where I
have no outlook. None.[/color][/size][/center][/i]


BWEE!!!! New1

[color=crimson][size=1][center][i]Caught. Alone. Tied. Death.
Morgue. Enthralling. Enticing.
Bitter. Scrumptious. Sweet. Blood.[/i][/size][/center][/color]

[Luminaire]

[color=crimson]Good ones phantom. I like the second one alot.

[i]Dying in spirit
Tired in body and mind
Damn reality[/i]

Hmmm, these always make me think, but I can make them really fast.

[i]We are connected
By an invisible string
I cut with scissors[/i]

~Lumi ^_^[/color]

[Guest Really Bad Eggs]

How about...

Oh no, I have lost
My calculator. I must
Commit seppuku.

[Phantom]

[i][color=red][center][size=1]Honor? Where is thy
honor? Shall thee lose face and
life for false honor?[/i][/color][/size][/center]

lol, ok consider yourself ronin... hand me thy two blades and be off with you... pfft :)