Fate Posted October 3, 2003 Posted October 3, 2003 [color=teal]This is the main character of my manga, Satan. Insight, please.[/color] [url]http://us.f1.yahoofs.com/users/3f7de387_150fe/bc/My+Photos/__hr_/da+dude+guy+1.jpg?bcAcff_A8f_cjDpd[/url]
Ares Posted October 3, 2003 Posted October 3, 2003 It's good work. How old are you and you can draw so well? I could draw that well only it would take me about two hours at least. It's very good and it looks cool. The character looks laid back and careless, but yeah it's neat.
Fate Posted October 3, 2003 Author Posted October 3, 2003 [color=teal]I'm only sixteen. In one of my past posts, I explained the entire story with him. It's quite interesting. I hope to go global someday.[/color]
Ares Posted October 3, 2003 Posted October 3, 2003 I'm 14, so we're about on the same level of skill I suppose. I guess we can't judge. But with no doubt I say that you are talented. I wish you luck in going global. Good job!
eleanor Posted October 3, 2003 Posted October 3, 2003 [size=1] The website isn't uploading, and it's not allowing me to view it. Can you please upload it with the IMG tags?[/size]
Fate Posted October 3, 2003 Author Posted October 3, 2003 [color=teal]If that doesn't work...[/color]
eleanor Posted October 3, 2003 Posted October 3, 2003 [size=1] Proportionally, the guy's nose is much too big. His shoes also seem to be bigger than his face. It might just be your style of drawing, but I think the body's clothing and all the extra things are a bit too plain. As in...it'd look better with more wrinkles or shading. ^_~ But I like the character design. I used to have a manga with Lucifer [Satan's name before he was...Satan], but I dropped it. Now I have a manga with one of the fallen angles Satan associated with. lol. Everything else looks nice, so I hope to see more of your work soon. ^_^[/size]
Fate Posted October 3, 2003 Author Posted October 3, 2003 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by maladjusted [/i] [B][size=1] Proportionally, the guy's nose is much too big. His shoes also seem to be bigger than his face. It might just be your style of drawing, but I think the body's clothing and all the extra things are a bit too plain. As in...it'd look better with more wrinkles or shading. [/size] [/B][/QUOTE] [color=teal]Ah, but this is but a simple character drawing. It's what every manga artist goes for: A simple layout. I'll fix him, of course.[/color]
Baron Samedi Posted October 3, 2003 Posted October 3, 2003 UUh. I think he looks too much like an elf- with the ears and nose. The actual drawing is good though. I like the shoes, and well, everything up to his head. It is well done. Yes the shoes are as big as his head, but it is a style... I have seen it in professional comics. I think it mostly looks good. Good job. 8/10
Krademon Posted October 4, 2003 Posted October 4, 2003 Really well done on the cloth and clothing lines, makes it looks right. I must say that when you do do the fixup extent the length of the face, it's too squashed upwards and looks odd. Apart from that good hob. 7.6\10
Fate Posted October 6, 2003 Author Posted October 6, 2003 [color=teal]Aw, nutbunnies. I should work harder.[/color]
eleanor Posted October 6, 2003 Posted October 6, 2003 [size=1] ^_~ Don't worry. Take your time and just practice if you really want to go places with your art talent.[/size]
Fate Posted October 6, 2003 Author Posted October 6, 2003 [color=teal]Well, I want to be a videogame graphic artist/character designer, so I'm trying to work really hard. There's always hope, I suppose. Off to MIT.[/color]
eleanor Posted October 6, 2003 Posted October 6, 2003 [size=1] ^_^ I remember seeing your fanart a long time ago, and I also remember they were all extremely well-drawn. I hope you get into MIT.[/size]
Fate Posted October 6, 2003 Author Posted October 6, 2003 [color=teal]I feel as if my work isn't MIT material. If I'm going to be a character designer, I'd better get the features right, otherwise I'd fail at my lifelong dream. *sigh*[/color]
Krademon Posted October 7, 2003 Posted October 7, 2003 Well I want ot be a game\movie moddeler (3D) and my character sketches tend to be a little too sketchy. So don't worry it's quite good :)
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