Writing Poems: Post Your Own

[ChibiHorsewoman]

I don't want the Dog Tags
Dedicated to my husband of 1yr and 2 mnths Lincoln

I'll take the memories of you with me
I'll take how you felt next to me.
I'll take your smile
Your laughter
Your tears
I want my memories with you,
Even if they're sad
I don't want the dog tags
I don't want to keep waking up
and finding you not with me
I don't want that memory of the
last time you were alive without me.
And the tags will bring back that memory.

I hope you liked that. It's really hard for me to type it up, even tho I wrote it a while back. Hey, take a guess at what my hubby does for a living!

[Isus]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Mimmi [/i]
[B][color=chocolate]with that quality, I am not surprised :)
how long have you been writing for ? [i]*curious*[/i][/color]
- Mimmi [/B][/QUOTE]
a while, but i went to poetry.com and sent in some to get them published......THANX!!!!


ok, heres another one
also titleless

Life in alove
escape me nver beloved

While i am i and you are you
So long as the world contains us both
Me the loving and you loth
While one eludes must the other pursue?
My life is a fault at last i fear
It seems too much like a fate indeed
Though i shall do my best surely i must succed

But what if i fail of my purpose here
It is to put ones eyes at strain
To dry ones eyes and laugh at a fall
And baffled get up and begin again
So the chase takes ones life thats all
while look but once from your farthest board

If so deep in the dusk and the dark
No sooner the old hope drops to the ground
Than a new one, srtaight to the self same mark.

I shape me
Ever remored

yet again kinda weird...

[thethespian]

quote:
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actually, i have a published poem.......or three.
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Really? I've published one poem so far. It's not that good, but i guess it was good enough to be published. My other ones in my first post on here are probably my best poems. Yeah, here's the poem that i got published.

Spring

Spring has sprung
winters done
the robins sing their song
as butterflies and other birds fly along
in the warm spring air,
at the spring fair.
I look at all these things now
and its simple to tell that i have found,
spring has sprung
winters done
summer is right around the bend
but spring seems to have no end.

Yeah, i personally like my Darkness poem and my Autumn memories poem the best. I have to think up new ones now.

[Mimmsicle]

[color=chocolate]No wonder you guys get published [i]*eyes dropping out upon reading*[/i] :eek:

I'll post this "poem" I wrote 7 years ago [SIZE=1](in swedish)[/SIZE] and re-wrote this week [SIZE=1](translated it to english and cut it down basically)[/SIZE]. Feel free to suggest where and how to punctuate this thing, cause I have not clue :cross:
Also, I know that the rhythm is off all along, that's a problem I have when I write more than 4 lines [i]*sigh*[/i]
so don't try to find a flow [i]between[/i] paragraphs, cause I don't think there is one *g*[/color]
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[color=blue][b]"The Age of Teen"[/b]

Here we are, standing in life [color=darkblue]surrounding[/color]
Upon closing our eyes we [color=royalblue]know[/color]
that elsewhere we must [color=royalblue]go[/color]
Not knowing where we?re [color=darkblue]bounding[/color]

As we lie in darkness, no shadows [color=darkblue]appear[/color]
Except that of the burning [color=royalblue]desire[/color]
that can only be put out by [color=royalblue]fire [/color]
Days are fleeting but you?re going [color=darkblue]nowhere[/color]

In the midst of chaos there could be [color=darkblue]sense[/color]
Just beyond hurt and[color=royalblue] loneliness[/color]
Unreachable - impossible to [color=royalblue]access[/color]
it might hold the key that makes [color=darkblue]a mends[/color]

Parents who think they have a [color=darkblue]clue[/color]
Standing in the way, waiting for the [color=royalblue]call[/color]
thinking they can stop our declining [color=royalblue]fall[/color]
Are greeted by lawyers eager to [color=darkblue]sue[/color]

Now there are wounds for us to[color=darkblue] heal[/color]
Round every corner a menacing[color=royalblue] threat[/color]
misunderstandings and words of[color=royalblue] regret[/color]
No longer welcome at the table of [color=darkblue]appeal[/color]

Doors are slamming where souls doth [color=darkblue]seek[/color]
a place where they can[color=royalblue] hide[/color]
the pain and hurt [color=royalblue]inside[/color]
Where tears fall freely down crimson [color=darkblue]cheek[/color]

Anger is boiling and tipping the [color=darkblue]cup[/color]
Begging for something to[color=royalblue] soothe[/color]
open wounds that [color=royalblue]ooze[/color]
Trying desperately to make it [color=darkblue]stop[/color]

Broken hearts are awaiting [color=darkblue]repair[/color]
Cause when all is said and [color=royalblue]done [/color]
weary we will have [color=royalblue]become[/color]
Fighting all that is [color=darkblue]unfair[/color]

In these days of aging [color=darkblue]youth[/color]
there?s something we do not [color=royalblue]lack[/color]
Namely the ability to hold things[color=royalblue] back[/color]
And we now deliver cutthroat [color=darkblue]truth[/color]

Constantly trying to stand on our own [color=darkblue]feet[/color]
we seek new grounds to live our[color=royalblue] lives[/color]
?Surgeons prepare your[color=royalblue] knives !? [/color]
It is time to cut that bonding [color=darkblue]weed?.
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[color=chocolate]Phew, it took me forever switch < > to [ ].

- Mimmi[/color]

[ArunueShekamari]

Ive had alot of poems published^_^
including this one:

"please,
help me from this,
i get pleasure in hearing you cry out in pain,
i want to stop but i cant...

Forever loving the thought of your death by my hands,
loving the feel of your blood run through my fingers,
loving whatching the death and destruction i know i have caused,
always alone and never satisfide with one more death...

Countinuing killing forever untill you rise from the dead one again,
always crying myself to sleep after i cut myself just for the blood,
seeing the blood in my sleep,
the blood of all those I've killed and can never replenish that feeling...

The feeling of death,
when you kill and you get a high,
you want more,
and you dont want to stop...

I cant stop,
only you can stop me from from killing again,
and your gone...

Dead by my hands,
lost forever in my soul,
untill i die with you and am rewarded for flooding heaven with souls...

But i am cast into eternal life,
forever killing and killing over and over,
never ending,
everytime wanting more blood then the last...

Until there is no one left,
I am the only person left alive,
and i must suffer,
for i can never die...

Always alone because of you...

Wandering this planet alone with no reason to live but i cant die because of you...

Because of you...

Damn you..."


I dont think its too good but......its over dramatic...not one of my better peices...

[Aros]

Breathing....

The haunting thoughts come to my head,
I breathe and think of past things said,
In my life I think of none,
Since the more I breathe,
My life is done,
Past words live in balls of dread,
The lifes of people and relationships shread.

My time has come,
To let friends die,
My past has come,
and I rely,
on most the relations,
that have died.

[Kieko]

[FONT=century gothic]Rain[/FONT]

If you don't smile again,
you will cry until the end.
So I beg of you,
tell me what I can do,
to make you smile again.
Cause I let you down my friend.

Your sorrow like rain comes down,
your sorrow like rain comes down.

You're in a life,
with your best friend gone.
And I know it's not easy,
in a life of misery.
So I beg of you,
tell me what I can do,
to make you smile again.
Cause I let you down my friend.

Your sorrow like rain comes down,
your sorrow like rain comes down.

I'll dress up as a clown,
and turn your frown upside down.
I'll pat you on the back,
and try to make you laugh.
So I beg of you,
tell me what I can do,
to keep that smile on you.
Cause I let you down my friend,
but I won't let you down again.

No more rain comes down,
no more rain comes down.

Your smile like sun does shine,
your smile like sun does shine.


This isn't a long poem, but it's something ^_^:

[FONT=century gothic]No Way out[/FONT]

There's no way out of this dark place.
No hope, no future.
And I can't stand another day.
But I can't see another way.