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this is the first wall i've done (i just learned how to use psp8). i'm not to crazy about the croping of the one image, but it's a little too late to fix that now. please, tell me what you think.

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Okay, lemme try and guess...the image you cropped was the one with Kenshin on the side!

Am I right?

Anyways, I think that's pretty good. The sunburst effect in the right hand corner fits in really well with the images (really pretty...^^). I'm guessing that the image of Kenshin and Kaoru isn't from Rurouni Kenshin, it's from...er...wasn't it Samurai X? I think so...

...(has just looked up Samurai X images). Well, the Kenshin in those images are much more...scary looking then that one, so I guess that passes as Rurouni Kenshin!
It's a really nice wallpaper, I must say. You did a very good job.
9.9/10

PS: Er, by wall, do you mean wallpaper?
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yeah, that is from kenshin. and wall is short for wallpaper. thanks for your comments.


i just love how a lot of people are always posting in my threads.
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Very nice work. The colors are bold, crisp and very...colorful. lol. I do see what you mean by the cropping issue. The outline of the orange hair still has a bit of...grime on it. I don't know if PSP does layers, but if it does, you can still rework that isolation.

My only crit is about the lettering. I'd say raise the opacity of the lettering, get "Kenshin" to show more starkly against the red outfit. If you do have layers, move the lettering to the front. If it's pure white, turn the opacity down a bit. Find a balance between the "Kenshin" and "Kaoru."

Nice work, though. Kudos.

9/10
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thanks. psp does do layers, but i forgot to save it as a psp image before i did it as a jpg therefore i can't really fix it. also, i'm not too sure how to do that with the text. but next time i'll try to work out the problem. thanks again.
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Very nice Chris. I love the pictures you used, and the font goes great with wallpaper. I also like how the picture to the left is faded.

I also like the sun-shine effect. Fits perfectly with the pic of Kenshin and Kaoru.

9/10, it would be a 10/10 if you made the word "Keshin" stand out more...

Thats all I have to say^_^ Keep it up!
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The wall is really good! To me it looks like the Kenshin on the side is having a flashback of him and Koaru, it's really sweet! The only thing I would suggest is if you could make the word "Kenshin" a bit clearer, it would be great! I couldn't see his name until I looked a second time. But it's still really good!
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