Art Please tell me what you think of this ad?

[Anne]

[COLOR=Pink]Hi
I had to do this ad for class and i was hopping to get so feed back from people who would see it. That is before my professor eats me alive and *shudders*. JUst tell me would you want to get this if you seen it or what your reaction is.

Thank You
~Mew~
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[~*Lilith*~]

[font=bookantique][i]Ok this is just my opinion but I think you should center everything and not make it to one side. It helps balance it and make it more pleasing to the eye. The letters should be changed and fixed to be straight so they don't collide with the other pictures on the bottom. Other then that it looks good and well created. Just work on it some more.[/i][/font]