Art My First Comic

[Zanarkand Abes]

Here is the first comic I ever made for my site [url]http://www.steelfang.cjb.net[/url]
Tell me what you think about it and any improvements I can, or need to make. Thanks

[Semjaza]

[QUOTE=Zanarkand Abes]Here is the first comic I ever made for my site [url]http://www.steelfang.cjb.net[/url]
Tell me what you think about it and any improvements I can, or need to make. Thanks[/QUOTE]

It's actually a lot better than I was anticipating. With a lot of first comics, I can't even figure out what's going on lol.

A few things... I think it would be better to have a darker color for the text. It's not impossible to read, but it's not easy either. You also forgot the word "next" in the second panel.

Also, from what I gathered, your character on the left has something in his teeth? It's really hard to tell what it is... maybe it can be cleared up or made bigger?

Good job otherwise.