Ezekiel Posted May 28, 2005 Share Posted May 28, 2005 [SIZE=1][I]The emotion of Envy is like a rose Where a rose blooms and grows In the light and warmth that is Other?s happiness, Envy is the same. Where a rose has sharp thorns Hidden by it?s happy and beautiful exterior Envy is hidden just as well Behind a similar mask. As a rose dies and re-grows With the changing seasons Envy dies and returns with each Ill-passed compliment and separation Yes, Envy like a rose, is beautiful But it is something that all must avoid If they do not wish for themselves To get hurt.[/I] Random.[/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hevn Posted June 2, 2005 Share Posted June 2, 2005 [COLOR=DarkOliveGreen][SIZE=1]Mmm.. I liked that. I especially like the flow of the words of the third verse. The last verse I didn't like too much. [B]But it is something that all must avoid If they do not wish for themselves To get hurt.[/B] I guess the words seemed casual compared to the rest that you used. But, other than that, it's beautiful. Envy is indeed like a rose, and you showed it well.[/SIZE][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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