Art new art of mine

[mangamaniack21]

hiya, it's been a while since i've had a nice critique, and i've done tons of art since my last post, so here we go again :3
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[Dot.Hack//LOVER]

These are very kawaii.

[mangamaniack21]

thanks, glad you like them :3
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[mangamaniack21]

updates ^_^ (oldest on top and newest on bottom)
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[jigglyness]

[size=1]I think you need to work on proportions. Try to observe the human body a little more. Imagine them as simple shapes like ovals, cyclinders, spheres, etc. You have good ideas, so just work on the proportions and it'll be great. :D [/size]

[mangamaniack21]

that's a good idea :3, i need to work on anatomy. it's always been my biggest weakness ^^;
but thanks for the critique :D
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