Kittie Posted February 20, 2002 Share Posted February 20, 2002 [color=crimson] [u] Seraph [/color] [/u] [color=royalblue]He sat on the bed And just looked at me His midnight blue eyes Were pools you could dive into He whispered pretty words to me The words flowed through my mind Whispering things he had not said (whispers in the dark) He flicked his tongue across his lips Revealing just a hint of his fangs His bewitching eyes called me Beckoned me towards him... My heart thudded loud in my throat I had to swallow hard to calm it ...not lust this was desire I had to look away from his eyes The look was too intimate He called my name His voice was like velvet Rubbing all around me The sound resonated off the walls All the radiance of his voice He caressed my face with his hand The sensation lingered long after he removed his hand His kiss was as intoxicating As the sweetest wine New sensations danced around in my mouth He drew strange words on my neck with his tongue Then he let his fangs sink into my neck It was like silk on a wound ? gentle but with an edge of pain Darkness flowed over my eyes and consumed my world In that instant we became as one And I became as him A child of the night...[/color] [color=seagreen] Poets's Questions/Comments: "Seraph, in Christian and Judaic belief, an angel of the highest order. this is like a pre-quel to Shade of Moonlight! ^-^ this is the start of my Shade of Moonlight Chronicles!! (o^-^o) Kit Kat Moon" [/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiha Posted February 20, 2002 Share Posted February 20, 2002 [COLOR=royalblue]*romantic sigh* That's so sweet...............Hmmm...now I'm in a pensive mood....[/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sui Generis Posted February 21, 2002 Share Posted February 21, 2002 Very romantic and depressing at the same time o.O Or is it just me...oh well...good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kittie Posted February 22, 2002 Author Share Posted February 22, 2002 [color=orangered] [u] Beast of Blood [/color] [/u] [color=seagreen] As the sun goes down In a fiery rage The nocturnal lights Begin to glow The angel?s eyes shone High in the sky With a twinkle unlike mankind?s As the night falls The urge comes stronger I need blood to fulfill my hunger As the moon rises high Life on the street comes alive -My madness starts to awake- I hide in the shadows Crimson eyes gleaming in the darkness I await my feast of innocence My desire starving of blood I can sense his fear As I calm him with Illusions of immortally To-night I shall not make another I drink to his very soul I lean closer to him to get a taste Fangs are shining brighter My breathing has now become obscene He screams the scream death brings It rips apart the silence of the night Red drops on my greedy lips Fall on his life-less body? With my desire pleased My madness ends *Don?t be ruled by your Beast Or it will destroy you* *I can?t control it?* I said sadly Because I knew it was true He wrapped his arms around me And we vanished in the wind? The wind carried a message : ?I will help you?.? [/color] [color=royalblue]Poets's Questions/Comments: "this is the third piece of my Shade of Moonlight story...seems a bit incomplete or something...can't quite put my finger on it...don't be too harsh this is like my first night as a vamp...and i can't control my urges or anything yet...'my Love' as he has been dubbed should have been with me and was night...for namesake he is Jean-Claude! ^-^ for now... Kit Kat Vamp =^-^=" [/color] all respects to Malice Mizer! :D :wave: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiha Posted February 22, 2002 Share Posted February 22, 2002 [COLOR=royalblue]Okies, that last part went right over my head, but I liked it anyways...[/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kittie Posted February 23, 2002 Author Share Posted February 23, 2002 [color=seagreen]see...i knew something was wrong with the ending! but i'm glad you liked it just the same!! it treally just means that he knew i was sad and all because i couldn't control my 'beast' so he just took me in his arms and komforted me... the whole 'vanishing' thing was just an effect i like! :huh: i'll use it more in my next chapter! :blush: thanx for the read!! [/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiha Posted February 23, 2002 Share Posted February 23, 2002 [COLOR=royalblue]LOL, Not the ending of your poem, the ending rant type thingy.....[/COLOR] :freak: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kittie Posted February 23, 2002 Author Share Posted February 23, 2002 ohhh! haha :blush: yeah i messed up plenty in there! it says something then i had the word night in there! :huh: i don't even remember what i meant right there! :bawl: [color=royalblue]Poets's Questions/Comments: "this is the third piece of my Shade of Moonlight story...seems a bit incomplete or something...can't quite put my finger on it...don't be too harsh this is like my first night as a vamp...and i can't control my urges or anything yet... that's about all this poem is about[/color] that should make more sense! :drunk: :wave: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiha Posted February 23, 2002 Share Posted February 23, 2002 [COLOR=royalblue]Much much better. I thank you in the fashion of my kind......*bows*[/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kittie Posted April 4, 2002 Author Share Posted April 4, 2002 [color=crimson] [u] ~Fin~ [/color] [/u] [color=royalblue]Faraway you are Has my voice reached you yet You stare up at the sky Past my face and into the darkened sky This night is darker than usual Death rides in the air all around us Don?t say anything You?re just a bit frightened now So don?t say anything Inside of the dream Inside of the memory We?ll definitely meet again The silver in your heart Forces out the pure red crimson That once filled you with life Not even my blood -Or Love- Can bring you back to health The commotion reflected in your eyes It all happened too fast And now has left you weak? Dying in my arms Your fangs still shine Though they will pierce my skin no more You flashed a smile at me -A weak smile- And the light from your eyes vanished Into the night? Into the wind? Never to shine again?[/color] so ends the chronicles...que lastima...so i skipped a few installements....i knwo whoever might read this won't mind... :wave: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spikey Posted April 5, 2002 Share Posted April 5, 2002 WOW, those both are really good. I like the second one best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Shift Posted April 6, 2002 Share Posted April 6, 2002 [COLOR=crimson]All of those are great!!! I like the called~Fin~ the nast one!![/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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