Writing ...a poem

[Mitch]

Here's a poem I wrote a while ago

[color=red]Soul Bottle[/color]

[color=green]Bearing a hole in my soul
deeper than hate,
my anger dispels
emotions impair
It is uncontrollable,
I can't just spoon it in like a little child,
It eventually fills to the brim,
filled with sin,
full of evils,
it explodes like a chain reaction
overflowing in burning anger
until all the sin is evaporated,
and my soul is full.[/color]

So what do you think?

I have many more, i'll post more later.

[RicoTranzrig]

Cool ;)

If you're planning to put up more poetry, I recommend posting in "Today's Poem."