Guest ShatterdTears Posted June 12, 2002 Share Posted June 12, 2002 "Empty" empty tears on endless nights dreary winds blow left then right darkened clouds hover over my place jet black shadows hide my face flowing like the rain that drains my tears are symbols of infinite pain the skys are grey as is my heart my soul feels trapped and torn apart walls closing in, i feel so trapped haunting nightmares of my hurtful past falling freely, but there is now end no one to help me, no help, no friend no one understands the pain i know i won't tell a soul why my tears flow these trials overcome, my life they claim the tears that represent their tormenting pain bumps on my road with puddles of tears from bottled emotions of those forgotton years Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Semjaza Posted June 12, 2002 Share Posted June 12, 2002 I suck at poetry, so I admire anyone good at it... And judging from that you are very good. I like it a lot. I bet you have more, so put them up ;). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Harlequin Posted June 13, 2002 Share Posted June 13, 2002 [font=gothic][color=crimson]Wonderfully emotive, and even better, it has a melancholy aura.[/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ShatterdTears Posted June 15, 2002 Share Posted June 15, 2002 [B]I drift away From everyone No ones with me To comfort or talk to They cant understand Whats inside I need a hand to hold And tell me why I cant see whats to come Or whats to become of me A tear falls From my eyes Emptiness is the sound that kills me now I've got to find my soul Find my life Find what I really want to tell me how It stings my heart Stings my eyes Got to find myself So I'll be just fine Calling your name No one there Cant tell where its the beginning or the end Ask the world Whats my purpose? But no ones there to look or wonder why I cant be found In this dark Nothing to see Or to hear So I find myself Find what Im looking for Twice I see the meaning inside me So Im not broken I have survived This is me and I dont wonder why I've got the hand To hold onto I've got the one to fly me away Through the air Through the sky I see now where I have to go sometime Reality Is not for me I've become who I want to be ------------ My heart is a worthless object It has been broken over and over Fallen but not catched Shattered all over the floor Please come back and put it back together Make me feel something other than this pain ------------------------- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hyper Posted June 18, 2002 Share Posted June 18, 2002 your poems seem a little dark... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkmoon Posted June 18, 2002 Share Posted June 18, 2002 The first one is very good. I like it. Better than any poem I ever wrote. It accually rymes compared to mine. But I kinda agree with Hyper Shadow, they do seem a bit dark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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