Writing WOW I WROTE A...POEM!! *hides*

[Shinkoru]

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WOW! Looka me I wront a poem, Im shocked!! :eek:
Well Here it is:[/COLOR]
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[B] With a love so strong,
and hearts so pure,
they battle the odds,
no doubt it won't work,
every thought it will,
they live everyday,
like it might be their last,
knowing that if it is,
they loved each other,
and they always would.[/B][/COLOR]

[COLOR=blue]Well? what do you think? (Be brutal)

BTW just for fun I included the picture of when i first did this![/COLOR]

[Talon]

...What pic, but Dani, VERY NICE poem. No brutality needed. Nice work, though I gotta get my OB poem from Jaimie. Meh...

[Mist]

[color=red][size=1] Brutality? In this case, may I ask what that means? It was short, sweet, and to the point. Like...nevermind. I'll pm you or something...Anyway, great poem; I loved it![/color][/size]

[Boo]

Yeppo! Very good poem! i like lot.
COuld do more with rime, but still great.




BTW: Will you continue battle again? :D

[Corey]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Mist [/i]
[B][color=red][size=1]Like...nevermind.[/color][/size] [/B][/QUOTE]

What exactly are you implying?:therock:

Anyway, I love the poem.
Since you want brutality I guess I could call Mist a certain name...
MISTY!! HAHAHA!!
::Runs away::

[Shinkoru]

wow.. it wasnt al dat good and. i guess its "ok" but.. tks :)