Writing When

[Dragonz Fyre]

When are we truely ready to leave?
To step out of our protective bubble of home,
And learn to live by ourselves, alone,
Is there ever a time thats right?

People say its at the age of 16 or 18,
But how many people acually leave at that age?
Some leave before or after,
It depends on the person.

Which of you have acualy stayed behind,
Past the age thats expected,
And learned that had you left before,
you would have experianced more.

Which of you left before?
Like, at the age of 14 or 15.
And learned that you should have stayed behind,
that you missed out on chances because you were a fool.

Its a choice, its up to you.
Just make sure that you know what your doing,
That your not making a mistake,
Because you only have one chance.

The question remains, when?

[Biida]

*smiles and gives it a thumbs up* It's great Cass. Quite true as well.. Heh.. *gives her a hug* And cheer up, girl. I promise to do the same. ^^

[Sui Generis]

As Britty said its very good and true. I enjoyed reading it! Put alot of emotion in it, I respect that. Nice job.

[Empathy]

It's really great cass...you always been an awesome writer, and I think this an awesome poem, like the rest of them, on or off of OB. Whhere'd you get the idea for this one? Ilike it. Keep writing Gurl!

[Mitch]

[color=red] It is good, but I can see many ways it could be improved. But the basis of it was well thought out. Good job.[/color]

[Biida]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Empathy [/i]
[B]Whhere'd you get the idea for this one?[/B][/QUOTE]

*Smirks* Would you believe, my boyfriend? XD

[Dragonz Fyre]

yes, your boyfriend and my big brother..brits b/f gaveme the inspiration to start thinking, Zach gave me the topic.

[vegeta rocker]

i like though i m a fan of cleaner rhyme. :)

[zidane11]

I like it. It's real good food for the mind.