Silent Death

Can't see... Blinded by society Can't hear... Sounds and voices drowned out by fear Can't touch... Emotions and feelings blocked out by memories and such Can't taste... Trapped in ths desolate place Can't Smell... Lungs bleeding, under a spell Can't speak... Growing weak, coming upon sanity's peak One step over the edge... Mind and senses dyes out ------------------------------------------------------- The last two stanzas define the poem. The guy in the poem is on the brink of insanity. Is this poem any good?

Great Poem, It's very dark and creepy :demon: I like it got any more?

Wonderfully done. That was a breath of fresh air in poetry.

Could you send me a better version of the poem? I'd like to see how it would turn out.

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Kaiba's Angel [/i] [B]Oh, and I like your sig lines. I've been debating whether to get those shirts myself. But you should know that it is: Can't sleep, clowns will eat me... over and over (about 5 times) [/B][/QUOTE] I got them just to see how people would react to it. There one good one that says "How do you keep an idiot busy?... the answer's on the back" and the back of the shirt says the same thing. It kept my college professor busy for a couple minutes before he got it.

Thanks for the compliments, I'll keep trying to keep the rhyme scheme going next time.

To be honest I didn't really understand it all to well at first. But it's a nice little story though. All and all, it was nicely done.

I like it. It's better than what I put up. So far no one has replied to mine. Could you tell me what you think of mine? If it's really that bad, just tell me.

I like them. Did you really write those when you were pissed off?

I wrote this while I was searching for some Asprin. I'm imprisoned in my own personal Hell Trapped in my mind cell Seem to be quiet on the outside Though screaming in pain on the inside Let me out!.... The voice in my head continues to shout As my head continues to beat and bash about My skull feels as if it's about to burst Could things get any worse? What the Hell is this vile curse? The pain is nauseating The pain in agonizing The pain is unbearable The damable being done is unrepairable What is this on my mind? That puts me in such a bind what is this that hurts me so? I just don't know In my desperate search for an asprin I wound up with a gun in hand And I've had just about all I can stand And If this pain in my mind doesn't go away I'm going to blow my mind A...(Away) ...Dang I missed

The game was too short, and the bosses were kinda easy (there were exceptions, But most of them got easy after one two tries) that's pretty much what ruined the game for me.

Christmas=Presents Presents=Money Money=The reason they put out X-mas stuff so early More importantly it gives people I know time to get my presents :D

A brand new Haiku Something I would love to hate hate to love, visa versa Either way I'd write one But I just can't think of any Can you help me? Please?

Death, comes in many forms Slow,painful,quick, and easy but... There is only one Deth In case you're wondering, Deth is me. My name is pronounced as depth, but sounds like death to most people.

So many to choose from...hmmm let's see. First I'll have to say it would have to be a tie between Sephiroth, Devil Jin (or Kazuya). Then the resident evil zombies (The Tyrannt and Nemesis... the list goes on.