Writing Something Concrete

[Sara]

[SIZE=1]It's remarkably difficult for me to type concrete poetry online. Thus, an image file....[/SIZE]

[Omar Harris]

Beautiful. Is the poem supposed to be shaped like a tornado? That's the first image that came to my mind when I saw it.

[Sara]

[size=1]No particular shape. They're more supposed to be somewhat random...at least to a point.

It's not meant to be read out loud so much as mentally digested....It's more of an amalgamation of throughts and feelings sort of....bound together, I guess. Instead of actual verse.

Mm. I do this a lot, but I guess I don't expalin it very well.[/size]

[Raiha]

[COLOr=seagreen]Exciting...I like the whole image as a poem thing! Very lovurley.....

And the background was very good at adding itself to the whole "umpf" of the poem.[/COLOR]

[Mitch]

[color=red] Mmm....this is the first work of yours I've seen, Sara. I'm not sure if I like it or not....it kind of is just a collection of feelings bound together in a scrambled beauty, in a way. But it's fine, although I'd rather like verse. It just doesn't seem....to effect me as much, I mean, well...I've never lost someone as it seems you have, so I really cannot understand this poem to its full extention...but it is good, yet still it seems to miss something to me. I'm glad to see something of yours [i]finally[/i]. [/color]

[Sara]

[size=1]You've really never seen anything of mine before? :: blinks:: Wow. I...huh. I did post something a month or two ago, I guess.

Meh. Now I just had to go and find it.

[url=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?threadid=15092]and maybe tonight.[/url][/size]

[Biida]

[color=skyblue] They're both beatiful. I wish I knew more of what to say, but unfortunately, I don't believe I was gifted with words.

I really like the concrete one, by the way. The emotion it gives off... and just how cool it looks, too. ^^ [/color]

[Dragonz Fyre]

great,the backround of the poem really accents it. It's good work. Keep it up.