Writing Digimon: Regaining Lost Passion

[Digital Monster]

[URL=http://www.theotaku.com/digimon/fanstories/dm/dm1.shtml]Chapter 1- Back in the Digitude[/URL]
[URL=http://www.theotaku.com/digimon/fanstories/dm/dm2.shtml]Chapter 2- The First Sighting[/URL]

The first 2 chapters of my first attempt at writing fics. I have 4 chapters done and a fifth in the works, but it's best not to link in too many at once, eh? Please read and review. All constructive cricitism is welcome, unless it's rude, so in that case, don't bother replying.

Just a note that this adventure takes place between 01 and 02.

[Na'dou]

I remember thoughs! They were great! I haven't read the others yet because I've just been inspired by an idea that popped into my head. It may earn me the nickname Morbid from my Teacher Mr. Boyd, but that's just him... (Note: It's not digimon for once.)

[Frankie]

nice dm

My fan fic... story is down it bit

Something New for Me

thats not the storys name but ..... heck.. its not a digimon fic so CHECK IT OUT and please give me your opinion

thats good

i cant say anything bad about those... i cant say anything helpfull either though

[Solo Tremaine]

I love the style of the dialogue. It's very true to the Adventure series. It's very good, I think. Well-paced, good description and colour-coded speech, too ^_^.

[Digital Monster]

Sorry about lack of more chapters, that'll be sorted once I find a new home for me to link it from. Those two happened to be at theOtaku, but the others are not.

EDIT: Managed to get a Freewebs site to put it on. Here's the links for Chapters 3 & 4.

[URL=http://www.freewebs.com/regaining-lost-passion/Ch3.htm]Chapter 3- Who Is the Real Threat?[/URL]

[URL=http://www.freewebs.com/regaining-lost-passion/Ch4.htm]Chapter 4- Plan of Attack[/URL]