Phantom Posted July 28, 2003 Posted July 28, 2003 My first haiku on OB. I will hope everyone will try haiku. It?s Japanese, and this is a generally Japanese fanatical anime board :). The rules: Three lines/stanza. First line 5 syllables, Second line 7 syllables, Third line 5 syllables. As many stanza as you may wish. I think this can possibly be a fun thread! :) [size=1][color=firebrick][center][i]Within a fire it Ceases to shelter water Because it is sweet About a stinging Pain that is feared, to touch me And smart all within[/i][/color][/center][/size]
Japan Posted July 28, 2003 Posted July 28, 2003 Alrighty I'll give this thing a try. Here is mine... Poor sad little me Everyone overlooks me How can this be so?
Mr. Maul Posted July 29, 2003 Posted July 29, 2003 I can't do Haiku I just don't know why I can't It must be my genes
Phantom Posted July 29, 2003 Author Posted July 29, 2003 [center][i][size=1][color=firebrick]In genes, lies nothing, Literally, you're quite good eh? At writing Haiku.[/color][/size][/i][/center] [center][i]Wednesday, July 30[size=1][color=firebrick] A mosquito, Yedo?s Most flagrant of nuisance. A Must-kill insect, aye.[/color][/size][/i][/center]
Shinken Posted July 31, 2003 Posted July 31, 2003 Something new; unseen Is coming at me, headstrong. Just what does it mean?
Phantom Posted July 31, 2003 Author Posted July 31, 2003 [color=green][i][size=1][center]To depressed to think, Mind racing, tears billowing Down a façade, fast. Trembling inside, With Hidden fear, hiding worries. Mind ablaze from flaws. Sullen, saddened. Tears Of joy, only a trance Suspended in me. [/color][/size][/center][/i]
wild thang Posted July 31, 2003 Posted July 31, 2003 fire is ablaze living always inside me unseen in my heart hatred welling up under my skin, inside me ready to explode im bad at haikus im sure that you can see that poetry is hard...
Shinkoru Posted July 31, 2003 Posted July 31, 2003 [color=indigo][I]Here is where I Am, In Your Arms So Safe And Free, Always You And Me.[/I] Well, Theres my sucky attempt.[/color]
Phantom Posted July 31, 2003 Author Posted July 31, 2003 [color=firebrick][i][center][size=1]Here, alongside me You stand. Beside me, free of All pain and anguish.[/center][/size][/i][/color]
terra Posted July 31, 2003 Posted July 31, 2003 I've lost keys again. Cannot gain entrance into My house. Woe is me.
Shinkoru Posted July 31, 2003 Posted July 31, 2003 [color=blue]Dustin is my man, I want to kiss him so bad, He's mine and I'm glad. The above was written by a non member of Ob, Stephanie Gauthreaux. Steph: Wow, my poem is so bad. lol[/color]
Shinken Posted August 1, 2003 Posted August 1, 2003 [I]Stuck at an impass, Unsure of what is to come From sins of my past. My soul divided, I know now what I must do To overcome all.[/I]
Phantom Posted August 1, 2003 Author Posted August 1, 2003 [i][size=1][color=firebrick][center]I?ll stand by you, I?ll Be with you, evermore and ?til death, together.[/color][/center][/i][/size]
Shinkoru Posted August 1, 2003 Posted August 1, 2003 [i][color=indigo]Trials, Tests, and pain, Why are mortals put through it, Can't we all be gods?[/i] *sigh*[/color]
Phantom Posted August 1, 2003 Author Posted August 1, 2003 [i][center][color=firebrick][size=1]To prepare them for the game of life and the one meaning. Full demise.[/color][/size][/i][/center]
Shinkoru Posted August 1, 2003 Posted August 1, 2003 [I][color=indigo]Nothing to do here, Just listening to her yelling, God she needs to die.[/i] Haha.[/color]
Zen Posted August 1, 2003 Posted August 1, 2003 [COLOR=blue]Unsubstancial Water it cannot be grasped Be like water.[/COLOR] I think thats how you do it. Yeah, a shortened form of my signature.
Phantom Posted August 1, 2003 Author Posted August 1, 2003 [color=firebrick][i][center][size=1]Florid, ornate... hai, Felled leaves, both colorful and Dull. Sakura... hai.[/color][/center][/size][/i] ...About fall. [color=firebrick][i][center]August 02, 2003[size=1] A fool, a child I Am. Weak from humanity. From weakness I dwell.[/color][/center][/size][/i]
roymund Posted August 6, 2003 Posted August 6, 2003 Thou shalt not suck-eht It is cool not to suck-eth Thou should be cool-eth Dang, had it all worked out and it was 4-6-4! Added -eth, made it all bible-ish.
instantramen14 Posted August 6, 2003 Posted August 6, 2003 [color=purple] Typing an essay it is almost completed computer failure [/color]
Shinkoru Posted August 6, 2003 Posted August 6, 2003 [color=indigo][center][I]Drifting away from, The pain i used to know well, Most the pain is gone.[/I][/center] Feels good to let it out with a poem.[/color]
Phantom Posted August 8, 2003 Author Posted August 8, 2003 [i][color=blue][size=1][center]Fallen, driven, down into the gully of life. Into the abyss I fall, drove, upon the mountain of eternal. Atop the cliff. For thou art kind and to me, all knowing. Alas, be it true to mark. Giveth me thy aim, and I shal anchor myself to thee. Forever.[/i][/center][/size][/color] ..That felt good... You know? To get it all out.
wild thang Posted August 8, 2003 Posted August 8, 2003 i hear the drums of war, sounding all around me. i know whats coming. homer says why you little and then chokes bart. man i love the simpsons.
Phantom Posted August 9, 2003 Author Posted August 9, 2003 [center][i][size=1][color=red]A call. Paid for by a nation. A company wrought from the bottom.[/color][/size][/i][/center] Kinda an odd one..its about a phone card lol.
Shinkoru Posted August 10, 2003 Posted August 10, 2003 [color=deeppink][I]Lovers in shuch bliss, I hope lifes always this wonderful, I love my darling.[/i] [quote]..That felt good... You know? To get it all out.[/quote][/color]
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