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Art Aldaran of Shidima


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Very nice my friend. I am not sure if that is supposed to be clouds near the ripped part of the cape, but it kind of looks weird. Maybe when you colour it I might see what it is.

The line art of the body and head has a very nice touch to it.. Also the quailty, no mess-ups or simply shakey, is something I like. The sword looks somewhat like a fencing sword, and the holder of it looks way to thick for the sword. I would make the blade a little more square at the tip. The arm that is holding the sword looks like there is no hand at all. You might want to put a hand there. ^^

Other than that, very good job, I love it. The hair is great, the line art is amazing, Great job.
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