Guest Anime_Forever Posted September 10, 2003 Share Posted September 10, 2003 Welcome to Final Zone. A 3 chapter story about the Planet Kiala. Time for the first part... [SIZE=3]In the year 2052[/SIZE] New technology has been created. Space tavel has become regular and a new type of transforming android has been created. A type of android that is around 8' tall, and and transform into a jet. Robots have also been created but they have not undergone much developement. A space traveling samurai named Saysuke with his android partner Jeen have stumbled upon a new planet. Unnoticed because it has always been shrouded in mist. Its red and around the size of pluto. The 2 immediately reported this to the government and an investigation was ordered. Due to the fact that nothing is known about what dangerouse life could be on this planet, a group of 8 people have been sent. Jeen, Saysuke, and 6 others. You will be an investigator (trust me this gets good): You can be Jeen or an investigator. I am Saysuke. Name: Age: Bio: Attitude: Gender: Weapon: Appearence: If your Jeen Ill post your data... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squall Posted September 10, 2003 Share Posted September 10, 2003 Name: James Starfe Age: 19 Bio: Always wanted to travel the stars, but could never afford to. He became a space investigator (hehehe) because of the need for traveling. His files say he died in an accident seven years ago... Attitude: Hot headed, grouchy, and slightly rude. Gender: Male Weapon: Spaz shotgun Appearence: Brown hair, parted and combed diagonally back. Black leather jacket, Zipped up on the side. Blue jeans, combat boots, and fingerless gloves. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Harlequin Posted September 10, 2003 Share Posted September 10, 2003 [font=gothic][color=indigo]Hmmm. I can see you've put [i]some[/i] effort into this, but can you please put more detail into the backstory, beef it up a bit, so to speak?[/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Anime_Forever Posted September 10, 2003 Share Posted September 10, 2003 Its kind of simplistic because its based on a manga Im writing. But its gunna be different cause in the manga its Jeen, Saysuke, and 2 other people who are really young. This does get good though... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Skyechild91 Posted September 10, 2003 Share Posted September 10, 2003 Name- Sandi Katherine Toru (Katt 4 short) Age- 18 Bio- She's the type you never really notice.She is smart and was always fasinated with stars, planets, and their orbit and meaning. She dissapeared from her home town and is thought to be dead by her uncaring parents. Adittude- Sweet, quiet, dark, mysterious, flirtatious at times. Gender- Female Weapon- Throwing knives, small hand gun Appearance- black, waist length hair, silver head band that holds back her hair, purple eyes, shorts, knee boots, tube top, trench coat(all black). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted September 10, 2003 Share Posted September 10, 2003 Could I be Jeen? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Anime_Forever Posted September 11, 2003 Share Posted September 11, 2003 Sure. But Jeens a guy.... and his head is a connon along with his arms. And he transforms into a jet... still sure? And the other 2 have been accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted September 11, 2003 Share Posted September 11, 2003 Yes, I'm sure. I need a challenge. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Anime_Forever Posted September 11, 2003 Share Posted September 11, 2003 Kay. heres your stats. Name: Jeen Age: ? Bio: An android that can transform into a jet. He and Saysuke are partners who have faced many challenges have come across a new planet, Kiala. His favorite phrase is "I need a promotion." Attitude: friendly, battle hungry, a little cocky, he tends to just kinda act normal. Gender: Male, well... progammed to be male... hes a jet. Weapons: His arms and head are long connons. Whaddya think? Appearance: Head: Connon, Torso: jet front, legs: Thrusters (jet back) arms: cannons Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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