Writing love, hate make mistakes

[XC SpydeR]

[COLOR=blue][I]"when sumone tells u one thing they turn around and say another,

its just like loving another. But then when u least expect they are always gone.

Now people may say they hate u but they really don't.

Its like puppy love you know they really dont, so runaway hide, it wont get any better,

unless u turn around and say that u luv one another!!!!!!!!" -Me'[/I][/color]

[Drix D'Zanth]

I'm going to give a bit of constructive critisism. Well, the post is ok, the syntax could use a bit more puncutation. Sometimes it was hard to see where your thoughts ended.

Also, use "you" instead of "u" , it gives your poetry/song far more distinguished appearance.

I suppose your opinion makes some sense.. to an extent. I agree with it in certain conditions. But poetry isn't about whether or not I agree.. i can definately understand writing something based on certain circumstances :).

[XC SpydeR]

Oh thats my poem that i worte for a friend instant messaging them so yeah i typed it quickly!!

[Heavyblade]

I agree with that fully and that happens alot these days. It's a weird layout and there isn't any punctuation but still good.
9/10