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Yes, short poems, right cha'! Post 'em up! I'll kick it off with one that I made last night in three minutes(In this form)

[font=tahoma]"I hate you all.
Can't you let me be?
It's now my time to fall.

Leave me alone.
Go away.
And let me hear Death's Moan...

I want to feel the cloud's fluffy fleece.
Or Hell's flames
Let me go, and die in peace..." [/font]

[b][i]-Six Feet Ain't Got Nothin'[/i][/b]
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Is this too long to be a short poem? I don't know about that stuff.:nervous:

Champions train, losers complain
Play the game, grow stronger with the pain
Ability is just a word, be judged on what you can do
A goal is a dream with a deadline, winning comes from inside you

Achieve victory when you're told that you can't have it
There's no need for a bench because you'll never sit
You are an athlete, your efforts are not to be forsaken
Nobody ever drowned in sweat, your heart can't be taken

Victory is nothing but a balloon on a string
Release it, let it float above the clouds, that is your test
You are an athlete, you are the best.
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Nice Charlie! ^^;; It's good. And yes, it's short enough.

[font=tahoma]
I step out into the daylight,
Questioning eveything.

Why is this like that?
Why is that like this?
Why is anything like everything?
And why is everything like anything?

Everything screams with pain.
And feeling Death's grasp.
Letting the skies pour with blood as rain.

I'm so sick of this.
Just let it end.
It shall cease the bliss.

And numb it all.
The World's End.
A Final Fall.[/font]

[b][i]-A Final Fall[/i][/b]
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[color=crimson]The Walruses of Oz,
Cause you to pause.
They have no claws,
Just two huge teeth sticking out of their jaws.

The walruses have no laws,
they just live for the day,
and that's ok, because they get to play.

Now I am finished with this little rhyme,
Sorry for wasting your precious time.
But remember to act like a walrus of oz,
Beacuse its a just cause.[/color]
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[COLOR=royalblue]Filled with an unsurpassing rage,
Lidan swung upwards twice,
Knocking the wind from her opponent,
She spat on his still form.

Turning to go,
She could hear the laugh of Sethi,
Her sister smirked and said,
"Don't forget to watch your back."

The browneyed beauty smiled,
And laughed along,
"I always do."
Then she left the place.

On the causeway,
The stars glimmered faintly,
And glowed a silver blue,
Moon shined down on her,

The blood singing in her veins.
Her hair tossed by the wind,
Eyes sparkling with energy,
Body flowing with power.

[i]Any life will do.[/i]
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[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Raiha [/i]
[B][COLOR=royalblue]

On the causeway,
The stars glimmered faintly,
And glowed a silver blue,
Moon shined down on her,

The blood singing in her veins.
Her hair tossed by the wind,
Eyes sparkling with energy,
Body flowing with power.

[i]Any life will do.[/i]
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[color=deeppink]:wow: I don't know how you get such great inspiration for these poems...but they're awesome. I think that I need lessons from you or something...:rotflmao:[/color]
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[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by BabyGirl [/i]
[B]

[color=deeppink]:wow: I don't know how you get such great inspiration for these poems...but they're awesome. I think that I need lessons from you or something...:rotflmao:[/color] [/B][/QUOTE][COLOR=royalblue]LOL, thanks, I get the inspiration from just living my life. If you want lessons, I'm free on Saturdays. ;)
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Tall, Long legs,
Short spiked brown hair,
Pale cream skin,
Eyes that glow hazel.

Smooth figure,
Lazy smile,
Her name is Ilekea,
The fair skinned.

The way she moves,
Captivates all men,
And the spell she weaves,
Turns the heart to passion.[/COLOR]
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[color=crimson]The Crimson Tide,
Of the Blood Drenched Sky,
The Babies Let Out The Heart Renching Cries,
As their mothers slowly die.

We werent demons of hell,
Just Souls... Trying to Escape Our Nightmarish Cells.
If you were to look inside shell,
Then maybe you could tell...

Let us rot!
That is all you sought,
Slaying the burdened,
Watching their bleeding forms drop!...

Now its time for me to go,
God just told me so...
The light at the end of the tunnel is bright,
Blinding my sight...[/color]
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[font=tahoma]I'm sick of this.
Let it end.
Drop the subject.
Stop it all.
I'm bouncing off of the walls.
Listening to you babble.
It drives me insane.
You did this.
You made me turn to murder.
You twisted me around

Now you can't say anything.
The knife silencing you forever.
You're gone.
It's over.
I win.
Again.[/font]

[b][i]-Driven[/i][/b]

Sucks? Rocks? You be the judge. And yes, it's brief, but it gets the point across.
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[COLOR=royalblue]Not bad at all.

Buring brightly,
Glowing darkly,
The flames burn,
Ever growing.

Sometimes sparkling,
Always warming,
The light dims,
And the hearth is heated.

Changing constantly,
A mix between light and liquid,
The fire grows,
All encompassing.

Fearing finding,
That place between past and present,
I do not know the future,
Nor do I want to.

Standing still,
On a cusp in time,
I can see everything for miles,
But still the fire burns.[/COLOR]
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come with me on this dark road
help me to never stray
for the loveless never started
& the alone died on the way.

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my eyes are always searching
for the face that i adore.
my body couldn't ever fight
the power of his lure.

my heart is being strangled,
hung ornately on his leather.
my mind i'm slowly losing
till the night we are together.

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bah, i can do better than that. give me a few minutes.
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[COLOR=royalblue]Gauntlets flashing,
Earings chiming,
Jaceleste takes her stance.

She is ready for the war,
Her sabre sharp,
And eyesight keen.

Prepared to take the blows as they fall,
And defend her master,
To the death.

More powerful than a dragon,
Yet as gentle as the moon,
But as lovely as the stars.

Clenching her fists,
She readies herself,
Adjusting her sheath.

A trumpet sounds, and she leaps from the cliff,
Falling feely through space,
Coming to rest.

Dropping into a ready position,
She takes up her silver blade,
Ready for anything.[/COLOR]
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