Writing What a screwed up world!

[Boo]

[size=1]-Deleted the poem from my life. It was too sad.-[/size]

[Shinobi]

Ah yes, Well, im scared now! lol j/k it pretty good although your grammar is wrong, you said:

I didn't had friends

it should be:

I didn't [B]Have[/B] friends

if you fixed that, pretty good *thumbs up*

[Mist]

[color=red][size=1]And that's coming from the guy who spoke/typed in all capitals...:rolleyes: It's good; (but not the greatest mind you.)Very nice concept. If you worked a bit more on it, it would be very well done.[/color][/size]

[Boo]

BTW: this was based on the Quote in my siggy :D
I just made a poem on it :D

[Mist]

[color=red][size=1]:therock: Oh yeah, I remember seeing it...[/color][/size]

[Juu]

Great poem!! erm... sorta confusing.. but still great!! It makes u sorta sad.....

[Boo]

Thanks for the compliment.
(both of them :D)

[vegeta rocker]

I like poems that are slightly unorganized in the fact that i find them more intense in emotion that way. I like it very much, the part about twisted feelings reminds me of one of mine.

[Boo]

Gee thanks!

(deletes vegeta rocker out of sheeps killing list)
He wont attack you anymore ;) J/K

[jupitersun]

it pretty good:) but it kinda makes you think....