Writing Forever Love.

[Juu]

OOC: ^_^' okay, here's a small poem I wrote. *sigh* most of my poems all come to me when I get bored..... *shrugs*
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My love for you,
has always been true.
Since the day I met you.

From the touch of your lips,
to the tips of your fingertips.

The day we first kissed,
I'll always miss.

Although I'm away,
My heart will stay.

Baby, I'll love you forever,

Forever Love,
Forever Love........

[Phantom]

Awe, that is soooooo romantic :-D soo soo this is based on a real dude eh?

[Juu]

:blush: Umm.... Maybe.... ^^

(thinks) exactly how do these people know????

[Phantom]

hey, i know im dumb..no need for sarcasm :twitch: lol

[Corey]

Sweet and beautiful.
I really like it.

8/10

[Mnemolth]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by DarkOrderKnight [/i]
[B]Sweet and beautiful.
I really like it.

8/10 [/B][/QUOTE]

Is it just my imagination or do you give everyone 8/10? ;) High enough not to be an insult and low enough not to be praise?? *wicked smile*

[Juu]

LOL, anyway.... that was my first 'love' poem, so it might be a bit fuzzy-ish... and btw.. john, I wasn't being sarcastic....lol ^_^'

[Mist]

[color=red][size=1] Juu, that's not John. That's Mike, my older [b]borhah[/b]! :D Nice, Juu! Great job! I like the short stanzas, and the choice of words was decent, but the emotion is what saved you from a really bad rating. :toothy: 7.5/10[/color][/size]

[The Harlequin]

[font=gothic][color=crimson]I swear, the entire boards are so overly quixotic its beyond remotely amusing. Reminds me of a song I heard once I think. Something about Forever Love. Oh well. Nice poem. A little more despcription would have helped, the words were overly simple, but not much else.[/font][/color]