Kittie Posted September 1, 2001 Share Posted September 1, 2001 please comment on it!!! SihT SI WoH I LeeF I'm enveloped in Darkness the Shadows have consumed my Soul Left me empty...hollow... Not knowing which way to turn I search for Death And not finding Him Only brings more pain and torment To my already dead Soul I guess I've been judged My Fate already sealed Doomed to wander this world... Alone with Misery... Drenched in my own blood... My 'Life' is all I know of heaven And all I need of Hell... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roxy89 Posted September 1, 2001 Share Posted September 1, 2001 [color=indigo]Wow!!!!!That is reallly good...You are very good at writing.:cool:...Keep it up!..:wigout::D[/color] ~:devil:~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kittie Posted September 3, 2001 Author Share Posted September 3, 2001 thanx for reading it Roxy!! at least 1 person read it...so i don't feel so bad!! um..anyway...thanx!!! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Posted September 3, 2001 Share Posted September 3, 2001 Hey, that's really good.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Digivise Posted September 3, 2001 Share Posted September 3, 2001 I'm reading it, since I love poems and all. I think this is great. Did you actually write this yourself. Congrats on that. *Smiles* :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sara Posted September 3, 2001 Share Posted September 3, 2001 I read it. Very strong ending.... Very good... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cecil Posted September 3, 2001 Share Posted September 3, 2001 That isnt my kind of poem but its good, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice Dragon v2 Posted September 3, 2001 Share Posted September 3, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Cecil [/i] [B]That isnt my kind of poem but its good, [/B][/QUOTE] yeah same thing except it sux(j/k) :D :D :D but really, very nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuja Posted September 3, 2001 Share Posted September 3, 2001 [SIZE=3][FONT=century gothic][COLOR=crimson]that is cool kittie... where ya been i havent seen ya around lately... oh well your getting ready for something lol... cant wait till ya come did i meantion cool poem?[/COLOR][/FONT][/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desert Shadow Posted September 3, 2001 Share Posted September 3, 2001 [b]Wow, intresting. I like it, neat! You are good at that. Haha, i figured out what the title was after awhile. Silly me.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chris.C Posted September 3, 2001 Share Posted September 3, 2001 Thatz a really cool poem! I think ur a great poet.;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kittie Posted September 4, 2001 Author Share Posted September 4, 2001 thanx to everyone who read it!!! :wigout: yes, i actually wrote that White Digivise...:D what types of poems do you like Cecil?! because i write more than just dark poetry...:babble: and kuja i've been here and there...getting ready for this and that! :) couple more weeks! :eek: once again thanx for the kind words everyone!!! :D :babble: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lil_hell4t Posted September 4, 2001 Share Posted September 4, 2001 whoa....thats great!!!! how long did it take u 2 rite that masta peice?...good stuff:p :cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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