Raquel

finshed...now i'm done......0.o

here it is...my first attempt at an interesting story...0.o'''...so...i hope i don't bore you...if ppl like it i'll wright a sequal ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` raven slid out of the shadows scaring the slim redheaded girl standing at her locker. "shiit! gezze raveie!!you scared the crap outta us!!" a short burnette was chalkish as she yelled at raven "yeah," agreed the redhead "so are you coming to math today?" "i guess..." raven shrugged doubtfully. "oh i forgot to tell you...your creepo brother was looking for you...somthing about "familly business"..." catheren (the brunette) shuddered. raver looked at her sharply "serric?" "mmmhmm...he's so cute!!" the red head giggled "oh god savannah!!! yuck!!" catheren gaged the redhead (savannah) smirked. raven shook her head " hey i'm gonna havta cancel that trip to algerbra...i'll see you guys lata..." she turns and walks down the hall way. she left the building at a run.turning the coner she ducked behind a dumpster as the police went by... winceing at the smell she ran down the ally.ducking through a side door she rammed right into a large biker. "hey!" he turned "what's a sweet armful like you doin back here?" "none of your business!!" she snarled "now now...diden't your mother teach you to mind your manners? no? well then we'll just have to beat some into you" the man rolled up his sleeves then he and his friends advanced. raven smirked bearing fangs. she gave them a molment then lanched herself at the leader. twisting herself up and behind him she wrapped her arms around his thick neck in little effort she snapped it. cradleing the corpse she bit into his neck. the other bikers stared, horrified. she pulled back having drained the body. his blood painted her lips scarlet. she grinned showing her white fangs now stained with blood. the bikers looked from her to the body of their buddie cradled in her arms then turned and ran. raven laughed, a cold sarcastic sound. it echoed through the ally finally fadeing away. she stood in the silence listening for the sound of her heart. a foot step sounded behind her. "it's not there...i know...i've listened long and hard... it's your fault that we're like this you know that don't you... you blame your self..." "serric..." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ reads it... winces... that's pretty bad...oh well... first try...0.o

ok ya ignored my first attempt to enter this thing so i'll try again...and yes i DID sign up...0.o ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ a girl appered a few feet away from the pair talking... girl: not again...i wonder where i ended up this time? flying is so much more reliable... raiha & blanka: *continue talking* girl: hello...could you tell me where i am at the molment??:twitch: helloooooooo????:wave: *walks up to them* hey you two!! *pokes blanka* helloooo??

siren walks over wary of the newcomers...

siren decended in a controled fall and landed with a soft thump to the side of cruizr siren: looks like i missed them again...darn... hmm...who are you?

ok um....*reviews thread* neil...*covers head*

oh god... this... well scanner crashed again so the only ppl who have my pic are anti, britty, and death knight...but heres my stata name: artemis, robin (i have two...scary huh?) age: 15 hight: 6' (oi...hey look!! migets!!) weight: 135lbs (hey! i'm tall i have that right aloth i look skinny...) eyecolor: brown,grey,stormy blue,green (if theyre green i've been crying...0.o there almost never green) sports: football, scoccer,fenceing,archery,swimming umm...that's it... oh...and if someone shows my pic...i'm smileing...not just that...i'm grinning like a pumpkin... it's scary...really scary...i never smile...sigh...oh for the happerier times

suddenly he felt a cold metal point press aginst his kneck a sharp pain the wetness trickeling doun his back siren: explain and i might not shove this sword through your neck

i am officaly...forgotten...:bawl:

heh finally... we can revive whatshisname and if you want to you can post another signup for this and the new ppl can start from earth :D just an idea...

is it too late to join? if not... Name: siren kojia Age: 15 Race: sayian Height: 5' 11 Weight: 120lbs Bio: ummmm...we'll see Stats: Strength: 3000 Speed: 4000 Defense: 1000 Ki:2000

siren cried out the bullet tearing a bloody hole in her hand...she droped her gun and staggered back clutching her hand to her chest ruffian: comere girly...i won't hurt you...much siren ground her teeth siren: *thinking* there isen't much choice...i'll have to run...untill i'm trained completely i'm useless...i need more strength...being defeated by this scum is intolerable...dammit!! why did you have to die??? grampa? where did you go? she turned and fled barly seeing where she ran to..footsteps echoed behind her and another bullet secreamed past ~~~~~~~~~~~~ if someone could find me i'd be grateful

siren sat up then stood and as if in a trance walked right into the fire...in a flash of green light she was gone siren: where am i?? ???: here siren: that's helpful...who...where are you? ???: i am here siren: :rolleyes: ???: i am everywhere but i am not a god siren: ok...next...who are you?? ???: i am me... siren: arrgh!!! enough half awnsers!! spit it out!!! ???: hmmm... they where right...you are not ready.... in a green flash she reappears and collapses onto the ground ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ sorry...i had to do somthing

0.o' me and sean been trainin for a looooooooooong time.. sheesh... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` siren yawns and gets knocked accross the floor... siren: ouchie...ohhh...pritty birdies... sean: heh...ok i think we're both tired... sh*t!!! look at the time!! we been in here- siren: :sleep: sean: :rolleyes: alright...i agree... he walks over and picks her up and he heads for his rooms

siren skids to a stop at hq and hops out she runs up the stairs and skidds to a halt in front of zack siren:?? zack: i'll tell you...come... siren and zack walk to a empty room down the hall...

siren: ME!! she gets up draws her sword and leaps into the air... in a neat controled fall she slices off it's head...blood sprays ~~~~~~~ wb... my own little fan club...join now!

siren: ok...that's great...now what do i do with these?!?*looks at weapons*

this has gone on for too long ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` siren kneeled in the dirt panting heavily...aj remained in the air watching reichou carefully. suddenly he yelled and sent a blast at him...reichou, not expecting this unthinkingly sent a bean to counter it siren: nows our chance to finsh this!!! hold on to it aj!!hizoku!! i'm going to remove his armour when i do blast him with everything you got... lets move! she lept up and sprinted over to reicouu in quick thin beams she cut the armour from him reichou: don't you dare!!!!!!!!!! siren: too late... she hurles herself away aj: hizoku!!now!!! in a giant beam hizoku sent reichou into the far wall and it caved in around him hizoku: i think we won... aj: i can't sense his life force... siren: good...let's go the three exited the cave and headed for the nearest ship... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ he's not dead... but that comes later ^_^' don't complain piro... if you got somthin better...post it

i'm dead

aya: *sees them and trots over* nothing... who's this?

when r we gonna start it

siren: this will be interesting...

suddenly a dagger seemed to grow out of the other gaurds chest siren: ^_^ score!!!!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ oi...wb...again

siren: ok i was wrong... this is pretty good...hmmm... she finshes her food and stands up siren: soooo... wanna train for a bit?

siren: ugggh..stool