Art Motoko from Love Hina

[Kaola Su]

I can't really draw too great so I was really pleased when this one turned out as good as it did...-please feel free to tell me what you think, and if it is an insult, please just use constructive critisizm.

Kaola

[conpiracymonki]

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The drawing's nice and clear, and there doesn't seem to be anything that sticks out as very wrong with it.

How to improve it.. I dunno. Maybe the shading on the hair? I dunno. Looks real nice to me. =)[/b]

*wonders where all the sudden artists are popping out from*

EDIT: I just noticed the neck thing you were talking about too, lol.. so it isn't that noticeable[/size]

[Kaola Su]

Actually, I think the neck is kinda long myself. That is the only thing I am picking at myself about!

Kaola

Oh, and thank you very much! :)

[Shinkoru]

Ah! *adores Love Hina* :) *loves Kaola Sue* I like shinobu best thou but the pic of Motoko Is asome. I love it, 9/10. :) U chould shade the hair a tad bit and i see what cha mean on the neck but.. It stil looks ok. :) don't beat urself up about it. It looks nice. Honest.:)

[Semjaza]

I like it. It looks like a drawing of a character from the game Earthbound almost because of it's simplicity and clean lines.

Anyway, I've never seen this series. The only Motoko I care about is Motoko Kusanagi anyway. :D

[Alexa]

[size=1]Oooh! I like the drawing, it has crisp clear lines. I think its good, if you color it it would look much better.[/size]

[eleanor]

The neck thing is a bit wierd, but nice job! It's very clear, and it has noticable lines. (something I need work with...)