Epsilon Posted July 1, 2003 Author Share Posted July 1, 2003 Ok, I'll start editing it then. ^^ Great, other people like elements too. My 3 favorite elements are fire, earth and electric. What's your fav. elements? I love it when ever I hear of fire. Ok here's another poem. ~~~~~~~~ Eternal Life Going round in a link Fire, earth, wind, and water All going round on a wheel Creating new elements to help the others along But often times they destroy each other, just as humans do It's an eternal fult, but it can be a mended by helping The eternal cycal of life hold both the elemens, and also humans Humans help the element, and the elements help up to live The basic elements are stronger, they have more will to create a new Fire, earth, wind, and water Are all in the chant of life to go on and make a new Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 well my fav element is ice fire and ethral (you know spirit) nice poem but i got lost... LoL! i get lost easily Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 1, 2003 Author Share Posted July 1, 2003 Thanks. Yeah, some times I can get comgfuseing and get carried away in what I write. ^^; It's a bad habit of mine to get too deep into thought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 not too deep in thought just i get lost realy easily i probly makes sense i just dont see it >.< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 1, 2003 Author Share Posted July 1, 2003 No I have some funny things going on in my head when I get too deep into thought. I know this because when I space out I start thinking what no one else has normally thought about. I sooner or later talk about it to some one else and their already lost after a few moments and these are the people who never get lost. ~~~~~~~ Fallow Fall into the shadows Allow you to lead me to a place of shame and sorrow in my life I had once left behind Own my soul, for I'll fallow you to the ends of the earth I'll allow you to take me there, and I' shall fallow you where ever you shall take me Fallow you, just ask and I shall fallow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decadence Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 good poem cant see the meaning behind it... well i can almost but its almost like its hidden behind a haze right now and i can se the outline but not the real thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 1, 2003 Author Share Posted July 1, 2003 It might be better if you don't get it. I guess, but it's all a matter of opinon. Ok, this is my last post for now...that is till I get back on. ^^ And I'll be on in maybe hours or maybe even mintues.^^ ~~~~~~~~~ Time Flow by on your own will With nothing in your way, controll the lives of others But wish to controll your self Time in controlled by destainy, destainy by fate, by time In this thought long for your freedom And wish for your power over me Time has a soul of it's own, same as a human Never forget that time is the same One line aways controlled, by something you can not see Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 Hey, don't forget about me. I had to get off the computer really fast beacuse I was supposed to have been half an hour ago. First, I don't have a favorite element because I cna't decide which one I like best. Second, the first poem was shifting between humans elements, links, and them killing each other. 3rd, you'll follow the person everywhere no matter where it is. Even if it's a place of eternal sadness. 4th, time just takes a lot out of me sometimes. Since I stay on the boards until my time is up on the computer I don't wake up til 9 something. But this is at 6:30 in the morning and I'm about to fall over on the keyboard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest XBebop Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 Realy good poems rubby, i spent about an hour or so reading them all. Very good, i couldn't do something that good in my dreams..My favorite is the first one though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 1, 2003 Author Share Posted July 1, 2003 Hey dayday try to get some sleep, your ment to get at least 6 hours of sleep each night. ^^ And thanks XBebop. ~~~~~~~~ Broken Pawn The broken pawn is on the floor Again lifeless and dead The puppet known as J-Pawn, it is gone once more Fading from the memories, that it had souly created The broken pawn is gone, in a furry of smoke Broken pawn is no long in this place, the broken pawn left in ashs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 Yeah, I probably get about 6 hours since since I don't go to bed until 1 or 2 and ignore my phone when it keeps waking me up. That last poem reminded me of Resident Evil Zero. There was a part with a chest board that you had ot figure out how to move. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 1, 2003 Author Share Posted July 1, 2003 Hmm....here's my next one. Done to the music of Outlaw Star, so it's like none other that I've put here before. Desire is probly the only one I write like this. So after this one I'll go back to my normal writings. ^^ So yeah... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Desire Longing to be free Of my own free will, no limts to my power To be an outlaw To travel round space, with no concern at all Throw it all in the wind, and take my chances Never fade.... from the space cop's top wanted This is the desire of my life Just to be free and drift My desire will never be forgotten Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 That was different from the other ones. My favorite part was throw it all in the wind. Wind...a gentle thing you cannot resist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 1, 2003 Author Share Posted July 1, 2003 That poem was actullay written to the song desire. I wish it had lyrics, that'd be great to listen to. Anyways here's my next poem. (Sorry this is the only thing I'm thinking of right now) ~~~~~~~~~~ Tilte-none Looking for something that isn't there I keep searching for you... Yet you aren't real, only a image I've seen in a dream When the wind blows it sends whispers Whispering to me where to go, where to look, to where I can find this image I've faded from all the places I've wish to stay Forgotten because I've been look for so long Fading away from even my own memories I can't remeber who I am, all I can remember is this image This image I look for, it's been clearing my memories I've faded from my own mind The only thing I know is this image, here in my dreams, and whispering to me on the wind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 1, 2003 Share Posted July 1, 2003 I wish I could get rid of the images in my head. When I have them my eyes are closed and it feels like things and people are around me. But when I open my eyes there's nothing there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 1, 2003 Author Share Posted July 1, 2003 At least you don't see them when your eyes are open, cause I do. ^^ I see very weird things weather my eyes are closed or not. People tend to aviod me because of that. And loce/crush...never had a crush or been in love so I don't know... ~~~~~~~~ Dark Shadow Darken mind fly around in my head Your shadow over comes me, then I'm gone from the world Fadeing with you is no burden Dark Shadow I'll stay forgotten, you showed me friend ship Dark Shadow, we shall leave this place Looming over my mind so well always be I am Dark Shadow's puppet And I glade to be of the Dark Shadow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 I have had crushes on people since I've been in Pre-K, literally. There's this boy I always followed around but then I got over him. About dark shadow. I see dark shadows all the time. They're the things I feel are around me when my eyes are closed. And sometimes I do see them when my eyes are open. If I'm in a dark area and don't blink for a while then I start to see things around me and it keeps getting darker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Author Share Posted July 2, 2003 I'm glade I've never had a crush, or else I might turn and zone out all day thinking about him. That'd be weird I see that happen to too many people when they like other people. Ick! ^^ Also I've been thinking of a new story plot line. But I still have to finish their char. desings first and work every thing out for it. So once I get that finished I might put the story up on the OB. Anyways here's my next poem. (And yes this is basicly true) ~~~~~~~~~~ Past The names I have I did not choose These names are of my past, the reflect what I have done I never have the same name twice Forever changing to the public, it is the same as my past never the same Memeories of my past hunt me, with each past there is a new person created My past makes these people But they are all soon forgotten I have no true past any more It changes with the names I have The names, the scars, my past, they all change no matter how hard I try I'll try to keep my ture past with me, but I fear it's no longer my past Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 What's with the Ick? There's nothing wrong with zoning out over someone. But I might just be saying that because they guy I was talking about, I zone over his friends too. I know it's wrong but I just can't help it. What part of that last poem makes it true. I don't see it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Author Share Posted July 2, 2003 The "Ick!" part is because people loose train of thought when their in love, I don't like. (It just buggs me) And the it's true this is the whole poem. Every 6-7 months every one forgets what I've said or what I've done. Each time they say something different about and what I've done. They go and make a new idenity for me with out asking, and I end up having to go along with because it spreeds through the school so every one thinks it's true. Some how even the teachers get and think it's true... I have 28 different nick names now., and I can only remeber 16 of them. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Spirits Fall Spirits fall along with the rain Falling down to earth, flooding the world with thoughts Rain will go as well as spirits The rain is like the spirits, the earth will break the spirit's fall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 Spirits, I think about those a lot but I never write about them. That's strange. I have nicknames too. I don't even know how many I have. Some people annoy me with the names some confuse me, and some are just plain stupid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Author Share Posted July 2, 2003 My worst nick name is Lil'Angel, I hate that one name. Ok, anyways this new poem is for my new plot line. It's not even written yet I wrote a poem for it. Pretty weird. ~~~~~~~~ title-none In my eyes I see ghost The fading lines of what once was I look more closely and I see This fading image is me What has happened I don't know People pass by...I'm not there Have they forgotten I'm here? Or am I staring into a mirror?Why am I fading? Or am I gone, but my soul refuses to die Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 My worst nickname I think would be Timothy. That's the name of the person I liked so that's what my friends called me. That's like not being able to crossover. You're there but other people don't see you. And you're not ready to go yet but you can see you are anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Author Share Posted July 2, 2003 *Timothy* That's better then my lastest nick name. And yep, the thing about not being ready to go but they are anyways. That's the plot. ^^; I don't think other people will be able to get it though by just reading this poem. (There's kind of a hidden message in this one) ~~~~~~~~ Dragon's Wings Dragon's Wings carry me away, away from this place and all the spite This place we can not stay Black wings of dragon's night, carry me away... From this dream of peace, of which shouldn't belong to me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 That's just one of the bad ones. The rest I don't even want to talk about the rest. Umm...*scratches head* I'm going to guess the hidden message. Is it like you are being carried away from this world? Death is coming for you to take you away from a civil place. A place that you don't deserve to have. Am I right or at least close? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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