Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Author Share Posted July 2, 2003 The part of A place that you don't deserve to have " is right. Also most of the other parts are right too. But the death thing is alittle off. Other then that you got one wrong. Think in a different way from a different view. This poem is composed of artical:2, line:7 in my honor code, but that dosen't matter since you got most of them right. ~~~~~~~ Return Return to the place where it all began Go back to the place where the nightmares all begun The place where it had all started Return to the place they all left you alnoe Back to the place where you faded from the world Return there to face your faers Return to the place of a broken past Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 I can't return anywhere. Everywhere I've been is probably been trashed by now or covered up. It's hard to go back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Author Share Posted July 2, 2003 You could go back in a dream or memeories, I can't get back to where it all began because it's not even in the U.S. But from what I know it's probley empity, broken windows, and, dust all over the place with light shinig in right now. That isn't even where began I was born, on my parents visit some where down south. ~~~~~~~ Burden Lay me down to burn To carry one less burden in this world I should be no ones burden I'll carry all other burdens I can, done in my grave So they may be a burden no more My soul will live on with them They will become my burdens They will be the friends to my soul These burdens made of sorrow The burdens, their weight are on my shoulders They are my burdens now ~~~~~~~~~~~ I think I wrote this because of Squll of FF8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 I know Squall carries a lot of burdens but he has his friends there to help him. Just because he won't open up to them, they force it out of him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Author Share Posted July 2, 2003 In the first dics he said qoute "If you want some one to talk to, go talk to a wall. I don't need to carry other people's burdens.I have burdens of my own to think about" anti-qoute, or something like that. I'm not sure about the last part. ~~~~~~~ Invisible Angel It is the one who guilds me through the darkness The one I talk to when nobody cares It is the invisible angel, it is my friend It can never fade from my mind I will never forget it The invisible angel is the one I trust most It is just an image of my mind, it proves my insantiy But it is mine and no one else's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 He did say that but when he has people like Selphie and Zell with him I don't see how anyone can stay quiet for too long. After a while he starts to help the others with their burdens too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Author Share Posted July 2, 2003 Yep, I think he some how helps Sefier too. But I haven't played in awhile. Have you ever heard in and FF games the line "Neither Cloud nor Squll shall stop me!!!" because it's in the games but I can't figure out who sayz it. ~~~~~~~ title-none Come and go through my life I'm hanging on to every word you've said No matter how many times you leave me I can not say why I trust you You the one who always leaves me, the only one I look up to Why do I long to see you again? After all these years, of learning not to be with you For I'll end up with a broken heart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 I havne't heard that before. Which one was it? I only have FFVII and FFVIII. So I know Squall and Cloud. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Author Share Posted July 2, 2003 It's in FF9 in the ending at a black pause, something just pops out of no where and sayz "Nither Cloud nor Squll shall stop me!!!" I think it may be a villin from both the games or maybe even the GF Diablos. I still haven't firgured it out yet. Plus there are two endings in that game, and it's hard to get the seconde one. ~~~~~~~ Deamon in my view There is a deamon in my view What ever I do it dose the same It looks not like me, yet it is my reflection Deamon in my view, who are you? Are you me or am I you? Deamon in my view we are the same All in one, shown together in the mirror ~~~~~~~ I'm gonna logg off now... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 I'll try and get that one. Demon in my view. How did you come up with that. I never thought of seeing yourself as a demon before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Author Share Posted July 2, 2003 I came up with it I started to stare at a mirror, the one wall behind the computer it's covered in mirrors. ~~~~~~~~ title-none Sweet blowing breeze, carry the whispers of those forgotten Bring back the memory to those lost Guild the way for those forgotten Those who are fading shall not be forgotten Carry around the and bring them back, back from the shadows, and back to be remembered by those they lost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 I just realized the way we write is completly different but still the same in some way, weird. Oh and scratch mailing me the book. Just post it up here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Author Share Posted July 2, 2003 Weird....and a bout the book thing once I've finish editing at least some of the pages I'll post it. Till then I'll put up the other plot line I've been doing so there are two of my stories in case I end up not editing it. This next poem is going to sound weird because it's for Dark Fortress. ~~~~~~~ Title-none Vorless destory the light Bring around the evil goddess Your dark fortress shall rise, it shall bring about your dream To see the pain that the goddess may cause Evil goddess controll your pawn, os that pawn Vorless shall fall The fortress shall fall along with him In the war of the goddess, the world shall fall apart All because of the pain Pain of the dark fortress Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 A dark fortress in pain. It'll fall because it can't stand to feel it anymore. Am I right about that one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Author Share Posted July 2, 2003 Yep, in the game the kingdom that ruled in the war became a fortress of darkness. It fell along with the people, Vorless, and everything else they had worked for to save before the kingdom went dark. I don't think anyone has heard of the game before, but it's a great game. ~~~~~~~ Fake Wings These fake wings hide the scars Your wings are black, covered in the dark ashes of burned dreams Your wings were broken long ago These fake wings have no meaning, only for show to draw the atteion away from your tears Those fake wings make them drift a way from youThe loneness that you get from those wings, all to make sure no body gets close Those black wings have made you fade All of this because of fake wings Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 I'm sure I've never heard of the game. I wish I had wings. It'd be like I could go anywhere because I was free. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Author Share Posted July 2, 2003 Wings...that'd be fun. To fly any where, well any where you won't get shot down that is. Still I'd love it if I could fly. But I wouldn't want angel wings. ~~~~~~~ Phantom... Phantom is the ghost I see Hunting the memories, that had long since faded Replying each act of life in my eyes Near the phantom and he'll disappear Phantom will fallow the moon, in the mist of night he shall apper The phantom to keep the memories, to keep them form being forgotten Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 I just thought of 'Phantom of the Megaplex'. For some reason to me it seemed like he was trying to save the Megaplex from being taken over. That's why he was running around doing all that stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Author Share Posted July 2, 2003 Phantom of the Megaplex....the last time I saw that was...I don't know. I've seen it once but I can't remeber. ~~~~~~~ Shadows Shadows creep around They're faded and be forgotten from this world Shadows come for the light, and put a vail over it's eyes They come and go as they please, till forced back by the light Shadows they rise, and fall with the sun and the moon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 I don't remember when I saw 'Phantom of the Megaplex' either. It was a long time ago. If the shadows came for the light then why would they be forced back by it. There's usually something there to keep the shadow. But don't answer that. It was a hypothetical question. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Author Share Posted July 2, 2003 Even though it was a hypothetical question, and you don't want an answer I'm going to give a short answer anyways."Think of the sun" ~~~~~~~~ Speak... They all pass by even you do too, not wanting to hear what I want to say You ignore my voice when I call out I try to speak to you, yet you go on by passing me like all the rest If you wish to be a stranger to me, I'll try not to speak Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 3, 2003 Share Posted July 3, 2003 I knew it was about the sun that's why I made it hypothetical. I know I wrote a poem like that one before. I remember. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 3, 2003 Author Share Posted July 3, 2003 Ok, this next one is because of the video game I'm working on. If you see digitalshadow's sig, thats the game I'm working on. ~~~~~~~ Video The back round fluter all around In never stops spinning, it goes round and round It creates confusion in my mind But it's only a fake memeory Some one else's mind, recorded into mine It's just like a video, of some one else's memeory Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 3, 2003 Share Posted July 3, 2003 Memories are wierd. Sometimes you have them and they never really happened. It happened to me before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 3, 2003 Author Share Posted July 3, 2003 Ok, this is a poem because of the book Dark Messenger. ~~~~~~~~ Travel Travel south, you'll find the goddess Travel east, and you'll come to Zoma Travel north, you'll find a broken toy Travel west, you'll find death The west and the north are one The toy marks your death, and the death is the toyTravel or travel not, you'll find your fate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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