Art More of my Anime/Manga Drawings!

[Shinkoru]

[color=indigo]You said b4 you all liked my manga/anime drawing so heres more! PLEASE RATE! OPINIONS THING TO IMPROVE! Please? :)[/color]

[klinanime1]

The proportions are kinda funky. I'd rate it, but I usually get yelled at. I'm such a critic... anyways, cute. Keep at it.

[Heavyblade]

[COLOR=darkblue]I like it but klinanime is right the porportion is way off. But that can be fixed with experience. A bit to lovy-dovy for me but "whatever floats your boat"[/COLOR]

[Shinkoru]

Tkz to my hubby yeh lovey dovey and porportions r right, lmao shes 16 hes 18. thats ECATLY how it is in the manga, minus her ears, and the kids r exact same, rough lines but same sizes.:)

[Phantom]

Seen these before..good but proportions are gay... funky would be a gay wway to describe them...kind of like kissing *** and stabbing back all at once lol. aside from lack of porportionary skill your work is pleasing to my eyes.

[whadubba]

Best parts are kiss and the kids.

Looked like he was attacking her and he looks too old for her, like she is a little kid and he is much older.

The kiss is the best part. awww

[OtakuSennen]

ooooOOOOOOOOooooooooh. Me likey.

I like how you did the Japanese sound effects.. Yet, sadly, I don't know what most of them say without a guide. -_- I haven't mastered Japanese FX yet.

But they're right.. The proportions ARE off. However, the three small panels with their mouths are pretty well-done.

E heh heh heh.. Um.. Next time try using some sort of ruler or straight-edge. If you are trying to make the panels kinda scribbly, that's good, but it still helps to have a base straight one.

[b]7.8/10[/b]

[Shinkoru]

yesh he its in my diary so, i was just doodlin to put out my feelings. And ill scan manga page if u wantb ut the porportion are correct on guy holding girl. Its from Chobits volume 4. Before chi runs off. hehe